Applejack and Rainbow Dash's relationship becomes more serious than expected far faster than they thought. The changes affect their lives in surprising ways, but that's just life and love.
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same time? A lot of things happen at the same time when they get Giggity with it.
lol
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Thank you so much for the input. The first few chapters are...
lol, you'll find the first few chapters are riddled with grammar and spelling issues. If I had to fix them all I'd end up writing them and then unraveling some part later in the story.
I'll write a clop fic that'll blast this one away.
Can you warn in the description about the twijack? (It's kind of disturbing, but that's my opinion.)
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I'm sorry, I don't understand. ....
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I mean, could you write in the description that it contains small amounts of Twijack (Twilight x Applejack) for those who doesn't like that ship (for example me), so it doesn't come as a disturbing surprise?
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Heh.
I wrote this whole I was watching season one. ..
Ohhh, the things I thought I knew back then.
Just wait, it gets a WHOLE lot better as it goes on.
And, thanks for commenting, it means a lot to me to know my older stories are still being read.
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Oh yeah, the mean streets.
I was planning a huge arc about that and it didn't pan out.
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At the time.
I've changed a lot!
The sequel does her and everypony else justice, honest! !
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Right on.
Good lord almighty, this was so much more, ‘descriptive’ than I'm used to. But awesome story!
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The sequel awaits.
7017455 I guess so.
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No rush, it'll be around forever
7017467 I'm sure it will. Your story has surprisingly given me inspiration for my story. Been having serious writers block lately
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Ooo, link me, I could use a new read!
7017503 aight. Gimme a second. I must warn you so far there are only 2 chapters as of right now. Almost finished with chapter 3
7017503 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/317478/rainbows-relationships-revenge
7017467 lemme know what you think so far whenever you get to it. Any kind of feedback is appreciated
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I'm at work and haven't started, but never apologize in the comments or in the description.
It'll lose readers and get thumbs downs before you get the feedback you need.
7017710 ah. Never knew that. Thanks!
"AJ? Are you okay? Why'd you land? Are you getting a wing cramp again? I can rub it out,"
Oh I'll bet you can.
I'll see myself out now...
Sorry for the belated notification, but for what it's worth this story has been reviewed by The Pleasant Commentator and Review Group. A direct link, which you already found but whatever, can be found here.
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I'm a contributor in the group.
I have inside access, too.