Nice to see another chapter of this story.

I dislike the demotion thing, it seems like that will only serve to undermine his authority. Demoted from a guard created specifically for him? How humiliating.

Anyways, who's this romance going to be with? It seems like it could be with Octavia and/or Vinyl, but I could also see it being with Cadence. After all, it seems like you intentionally didn't put her in a relationship with Gleaming Shield.

I should have brought cambell to this!

Glancing around he saw that many of the nobles weren't looking at him with contempt anymore. They were now directing their dislike at this Blueblood. Some of them seemed rather conflicted on who to hate more.

When even the pompous idiots think you are a pompous idiot then you have a problem.

Maybe if she was still here.

Only ONE she that I know makes Celestia melancholy. And Twilight hasn't left to check on the Summer Sun Celebration yet....!!!!

"And yet you come to my nightclub quite a lot," Vinyl said, smirking.

A small blush appeared on Octavia's face, but she smirked back

I have the perfect Video for this.

"Corvo doesn't seem like the kind of stallion to mess with dark magic, Blueblood." The prince was about to say something else, before she interrupted, "And even if he did, there would be traces of it on him." She then continued to cast the spell and looked at his memories. As they played out in her mind, she slowly began to frown. When they ended, she glared at Blueblood, who shivered under her gaze. "It seems that you withheld a great deal of information. Such as the fact that not only did you make a racial remark towards him and earth ponies in general, but you also attacked him for no reason." She continued to glare at him, until finally she said, "Leave, Blueblood."

"Yes, and it's because of this that I need to do something. We can't have the guards threatening civilians. Even if they do insult you," she said regrettably. "I'm afraid I must remove you from being the Captain of the Crow Guard." She then smiled slightly and continued, "But only as Captain."

I'm sorry what?
he attacked Corvo, a captain of the crow guard and all Blueblood gets is a angry look?
plus Corvo gets demoted from his own guard?
dafug?
also the fact that she said nothing about the attack in the second line is just an insult at this point.