This is really good! I can't wait for more.

My my! first the witch then the assassin and now the despot...the outsider really knows how to make a game interesting!

Corvo, u noob. Manitcore says it has a score to settle with "Raven" who smells of killing, Daud was ported to Equestria as well, Daud has Outsider magic as well, Raven = Daud Logic

"Feel the magic... of Faust!!"

Oh my Faust that was cringe inducing. But it was funny, and totally called for so I love it.

There was no point in Corvo not being in his ponies form nor Celestia telling the whole town his name.

It looks like daud got into some trouble and saved some lives

He answered rather flamboyantly, "Well, I don't know. I was just sitting here, not bothering anyone, when this tacky little cloud of purple smoke just whisked past me and tore half of my beloved mustache clean off, and now I look just horrid." He fell backward into the river and caused a wave of water to drench everypony.

He just called Nightmare Moon tacky