MLP FiM Fanfic: Void of the Heart
By: Lucario247
Prologue: Party Crasher
The being was quite bored. He was currently occupying a dream about some video game. He decided to just add a few zombies and be done with it. After exiting the dream, the being entered the usual empty void that was his home. He sat there staring at nothing for...who knows how long. Then suddenly something entered the void. It was another stray dream, but this one was different. Usually stray dreams that enter the void are inanimate objects like birthday presents or jewelry, something that was loved. But this stray dream was a living thing, or at least was believed to be by the dreamer. The creature floating in the void with the being was a Pegasus, much like the ones from the place where the being was from. The being had an idea, "If I could somehow use the stray dream's form, I could return to Equestria!" With this thought in his head the being flew towards the stray dream. When the two made contact everything burst into a flash of white.
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The party was going quite well. Music was playing. Cake was being eaten. The five guest ponies were dancing alongside their host. It seemed like all was well in the world. Then suddenly in a great flash of light, several magic rings, covered with rune like symbols, materialized in the air. Floating in the center of them was a Pegasus.
What? they have individual chapter options for a reason.
I would seriously recommend that you chop this up into separate chapter sections. It'll make your work a lot easier to get into, as petty as that may seem.
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Ya this was before I understood that.
I might fix it if I'm not lazy or something
O.O THE TEXT WALLS THEY BUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNN
I made this offence in my first fic....break the paragraphs up and divide this puppy into correct chapters if not it gets confusing
do this and do my standby get an editor and have them do the hard part... >;3 thats my plan and It always works for me
Sure sure