My Little Hell Pony

Diamond Tiara pushes Apple Bloom too far, and the little pony decides to take up arms against oppression. Will she pay the ultimate price to end her grudge? Could any pony even dream of such a thing in Ponyville?

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Mauser1888

Mauser1888 #1 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Hell Girl disturbed the heck out of me. I don't believe anyone could conceivably do anything that would warrant an eternity of punishment. I felt so sorry for both Apple Bloom and Diamond Tiara in this story. At least it ended on a happy note!

Hillbe

Hillbe #2 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

good cross over,,,,well done

InSaNePINKAMENA

InSaNePINKAMENA #3 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Wow! Just...wow. You unsettled and warmed me at the same time. Not many one chapter stories can achieve that, you should be very proud!

zalla661

zalla661 #4 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

That was a nice little story. I didn't expect it to be a dream though. I have a question. This is a crossover, bu t what is it of?

seeker71

seeker71 #5 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Hi, thanks for the comment. This is a crossover of FIM (obviously ) and an anime called Jigoku Shoujo ( Hell Girl if you prefer the English).

seeker71

seeker71 #6 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Hi there. Thank you for your comment. I am happy that you find it to be so good.

zalla661

zalla661 #7 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

5688123 Never heard of it. Guess I'll go look it up now that I know. I still loved it. I honestly was thinking Drag me to hell when I saw the word crossover with the story. Guess I was sooo, wrong! No worries I still loved it.

You should do Silver Spoon next! just don't kill her she's my second favorite character.

seeker71

seeker71 #8 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Hi there, thanks for your comment. I am glad to hear it entertained you.

seeker71

seeker71 #9 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you for your comment. It seemed to me the threat of eternal punishment had to be here or it wouldn't be a good crossover. But I also realized that I needed to find a blend of the angsty darkness of Hell Girl and the lightness that is FIM. Hopefully I succeeded.

seeker71

seeker71 #10 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Um, I suppose I could try, but do you mean with Hell Girl specifically, or will any dark anime do?

zalla661

zalla661 #11 · Mar 2nd, 2015 · · ·

5688169 Anyone I guess. Maybe the same thing like have Scootaloo do something similar to Silver or the other way around. You did it so well I feel you could easily make it for another set. The hell Girl one would make the most sense though.

seeker71