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Well, damn, i think one night horse is going to kill some Seraphs with extreme prejudice.
9746375 I think you may be right.
Another excellent chapter, Nightsong-love!
Sweet Celestia, you are just on a writing roll lately!
Can't wait to see what happens in the next one!
Id love to treat these guys to a neat trick a big ship can use against multiple small untargetable incoming.
I call it the Plasma Shield Oreo.
Plasma, so that the shields are not just mere forecefields, but Aegis class Wall Shields.
I hope Luna goes Gravity on these guys. Lets see how their own ships stand up to their fighters being sent back to them at a sizeable fraction light speed, or even better, quantumly unstable due to being affected by a fully unsafed light spell.
Seraph drones are the dumb ones, the one that let itself be captured for information was a Hive Centurion?
Much as I like space combat, this feels, unfocussed. So many different viewpoints, it gets confusing. Also the continuous combat is tiring, there's no time for the reader to metaphorically catch their breath.
Also, the Seraph feel like they are whatever they need to be to be a threat and keep the story going, rather than a coherent society.
Not that this story is bad, or I wouldn't be reading it, but it would be nice to have some down time in story, where you can collect all the plot threads and bring them together. Sort of like the recovery episodes you did after the original invasion.
Luna + her night guard + close quarter combat with Seraphs. I wish you all could see the bloodlust in my eyes right now. No Mercy asked, No Mercy given. Good Hunting Best Princess
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Don't you worry, we're getting to the exposition and more "slice of life"-y chapters soon. :)
Looking forward to more awesome exciting chapters!
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Oh, hell yeah! Ave Luna! Semper Noctem!
Who will win, Hundreds of seraph boarding craft with possibly thousands of seraph, or One Lunar Boi
So far it seems the Seraph have humanity on the back foot. Who expected boarding ops in a space battle?
977746 Sadly, war is never easy, and is often back and forth. This will be a long one.
Okay, I can accept the Seraph fleet jumping into Sol... but when did they have enough time to build those asteroids???? It seems between their fleet being driven from Equus they barely had enough time to find the Sol System and get there, much less build such massive and powerfully temporary attack vessels.
I can not wait to see Luna cut loose!
IS there EVER going to be a new chapter for this story?!?!?!?!?!