The Everfree forest, home of many dangerous creatures. When one of Twilights spells go wrong the forest quiets down but there is also a new type of beast that dwells in the Everfree, one that roars, has a coat of metal and feet of rubber.
7398786 the arrows where embedded into it when it was younger. Also skin is not as thick as bone and not as tough. also that bear doesn't belong on earth. the skull on it has to be pretty thick if the bear is that size.
7400616 gun captin here you do know .50 cal rounds are used against light armored vehicles ap versions can be used against tanks it can easily punch through layers of ceramic plates easily so just use a 5.56 or a 7.62 would make more sense
WHY YOU END IT THERE!?
Finally we get to the point of the first chapter cant wait for the next one
Oh man, can't wait for the next chap.
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This is going to be fun.
You should make this song the combat song for Stones and Tyrock.
7260765 cliff hanger. Makes it so people keep reading.
7264084 thanks that sound just right for them.
7270281 Glad i could help its also my favorite song
When is the next chapter coming out?
7272006 i dont know yet im trying to figure out how to go about it.
7274100 Maybe i can help?
This says it's displaced, but doesn't mention what the displaced are.:\
7372801 the two humans tyrock and stones.
7373706 Never heard of them. Interestin' names though.
7398786 the arrows where embedded into it when it was younger. Also skin is not as thick as bone and not as tough. also that bear doesn't belong on earth. the skull on it has to be pretty thick if the bear is that size.
I'm guessing celestia is stone's mother also you had to leave it on a cliffhanger.
7454979 well if I didn't leave it on a cliffhanger you would want to keep reading.
7457769 yes because the story is solid a good story doesn't need cliffhangers until the actual end of the story.
7400616 gun captin here you do know .50 cal rounds are used against light armored vehicles ap versions can be used against tanks it can easily punch through layers of ceramic plates easily so just use a 5.56 or a 7.62 would make more sense
7656111 thanks for the info but i have always had a deep liking for giving badass heroes a barret 50 cal. i also did it to show off their strength.