The Everfree forest, home of many dangerous creatures. When one of Twilights spells go wrong the forest quiets down but there is also a new type of beast that dwells in the Everfree, one that roars, has a coat of metal and feet of rubber.
Massive inconsistency alert! Stone is on death's doorstep at the end of the last chapter and now suddenly, he's fine. This inconsistency needs to be addressed immediately. It detracts from the story, badly.
And with the psychotic cunt unicorn, I'm done. If somebody points a gun at me, I am NEVER forgiving them, ever. I have had that shit done to me I.R.L. and the guy told me he was joking. I beat the shit out of him and I have not spoken to him since. I could not even bring myself to finish the chapter.
Don't feel obligated to read my story, bro. I couldn't finish yours. You don't owe me anything. I'm sorry I couldn't finish the story.
Massive inconsistency alert! Stone is on death's doorstep at the end of the last chapter and now suddenly, he's fine. This inconsistency needs to be addressed immediately. It detracts from the story, badly.
And with the psychotic cunt unicorn, I'm done. If somebody points a gun at me, I am NEVER forgiving them, ever. I have had that shit done to me I.R.L. and the guy told me he was joking. I beat the shit out of him and I have not spoken to him since. I could not even bring myself to finish the chapter.
Don't feel obligated to read my story, bro. I couldn't finish yours. You don't owe me anything. I'm sorry I couldn't finish the story.
I would've beat that horse for taking me out of my world to this one. Especialy if it disarmed me and points the gun towards me.
This story is starting to go at a good pace