"Again! Try to hit the high notes darling. Do re mi fa sol la ti dohhh~" Rarity used the solfège method. "Now..."
Rainbow Dash opened her mouth."Doh to the re to the fa to the sol-la-ti-doh. Word!"
Pinkie cackled wildly on the floor of the boutique, while Rarity wondered why she was even trying. The cutie mark crusaders were all present as well.
"Ooooohh Rainbow Dash and Applejack sittin' in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. First comes love, then comes marriage, then comes..." All three fillies stopped their chanting and looked at each other. "Uhh..what comes after?"
Rainbow Dash shrugged. "Eh, then comes really great se-"
"RAINBOW DASH!" Rarity practically screeched. "Not in front of *ahem*" she used her head to gesture towards the three young ponies in front of them. And Pinkie pie.
"Se-se-serenading! Yup! Serenading. That's it!" Rainbow caught herself before Rarity landed a hoof to her face. "It'll be totally cool. I even wrote her a song and I'm gonna sing it to her tonight."
"Awwwww" Sweetie Belle and Applebloom said in unison, while Scootaloo wondered how her idol became so infatuated with the orange mare.
"Alright. I'll be there tonight at 9 squirt," Rainbow laid out the plan to Applebloom. "Ok, so when I get to the barn, which room is hers? Top right or top left?"
"Top left" Applebloom answered.
"Your left or my left. I don't wanna mess this up." Rainbow repeated to make sure.
"Yer left" Applebloom assured. "Definitely yer left."
"Alright. Thanks squirt. Laters!" Rainbow gave each filly a hoof bump and zoomed out of the boutique.
"Or was it right..." Applebloom sat down and thought about it once more.
"Rarity?" Pinkie asked, "Who's *ahem*? Is she or he new here? Do I have to make a banner that says 'Welcome to Ponyville Ahem!' and throw a huge, awesospectacular party!"
Rarity's face made contact with her own hoof, as Pinkie gave her a wide smile.
"Ok here goes nothing." Rainbow Dash said to herself. "AB warned you AJ's a heavy sleeper so you gotta make it loud enough."
Rainbow saw that the top left window was slightly open and that the light was still open. She made a mental note to give another hoof bump to Applebloom for doing that.
She positioned a rain cloud right above her head and made sure there was enough water in it. She then pressed 'rewind' on the portable radio she was carrying.
As the clock struck 9, Rainbow flew right up to the cloud and kicked it. She immediately pressed 'play' button and turned up the volume. When the rain started to fall, she held the radio above her head and began singing.
It's your eyes, it's your smile
It's everything about you and more
You're the pony that I adore
So why can't you see me that way?
You say I'm lazy, you drive me crazy
All these feelings are all hazy
But freckles, there's something you should know
I like you way more than I say
You're the apple of my eye
So to ends of the world, I'll fly
To show you, to show you~
That maybe you and me could be we
Rainbow's ears perked up at the sound of hoofsteps coming to the window. Her heart was pounding so loud she thought her wings would give way. Time for the finale.
So baby, please please please....
Will you go out with m-
A 'SMACK' sound was made as the purse came in contact with Rainbow's muzzle.
"SHAAD UP! Ah'm tryin' ta sleep here!" Granny Smith grumbled, "Dern pegasus causin' a racket...."
Rainbow held her muzzle with both hooves, in pain, wondering what in the world just happened.
Meanwhile, Applejack tucked herself in her grandmother's bed. "Granny's right. This mattress is too lumpy. At least fer tonight, she'll get a good night's rest."
Poor Rainbow. I swear, her luck is worse than mine sometimes.
And for whatever weird reason, I didn't get a notification of any kind when this updated. I only found out when I checked the "Feed" Section of my account.
And I have it not only in my Favorites, but I also have it on "Tracking". So what the hay?!
(scream laughing and clapping)
5598633 Same here that's weird huh? I think something is wrong with the website.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME AND SO FUNNY!!!! Poor RD I think the end when the confession comes out is when AJ is really sad and RD just comforts her or something.
5598935
Yeah, it is.
Well, at least I'm not the only one that it happens to! Sorry it's happening to you, too.
And probably so. It's happened to at least one other story that I'm Watching. I'll get a notification in "Tracking" when it updates, but not in my "Especial Especial Favorites" Bookshelf, which is also where it is. Drives me absolutely nuts!
Yeah, me. too! It's such agreat story!
And I bet you're right.
We've got 7 more chapters to go before we finally fine out for sure, though.
5599001 It only happened to this story for me... Or so I think, I need to check my favorites just in case .
GAH! I NEED THOES CHAPTERS!!!!
5599595 Well, I hope that this is the only one that it happens to. This kinda thing is one heck of a pain!
But I need to check my other Favorites Bookshelves to check and see if I've missed anyway soon, as well. Hopefully everything's up to date, and I haven't missed any.
Yeah! Me, too!
5599669 Yeah same just in case. Part of me hopes that it will all be up to date and the other part hopes there are new chapters because I love reading new chapters that I love!!
I think AJ knows though because some things made it totally obvious and I think AJ is just messing with RD now seeing how many failed attempts or something. Because like the letter I would think she would have noticed and the flowers and the dictionary thing. I think Applejack is just pulling Rainbows leg now.
5599875 Yeah, I hear ya. That's me, too.
Good points, those, m' dear.
And I'm beginning to wonder about that myself.
5600144 lol
It also looks like it in the pic
5600531 Yup.
And this is true.
love it when will u write more
Gets a big apple, and shoves it right into RD's mouth.
I love this story so far. It reminds me of that crusaders song 'are we there yet' for some reason…