Rarity just loves being dominated. She likes how it spices up the bedroom activities.
~TOOWC

Sombra is really smooth and I'm surprised that Rarity also "knows" some mares. Anyhow, this is a good chapter.

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aaa-sex time?

Why is his baby batter purple?

5561427 Because.

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Moarrrr

Moar nao!

Awesome!

I imagine Applejack is next? I dub that shipping Sombrajack and this is their theme song.

"say for his underwear"
The phrase you were thinking of was
"save for his underwear"

Each chapter starts out so cheesy, then by the end it is ridiculously over he top.
And I love, love ,love, love, love, love, love, love, love, LOVE it.

Holy fuqs.

amazing chapter, I like how you tied it in with the first chapter, I assume AJ is next to get bucked?

5567001 You assume right.

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“Gods above, Sombra… what kind of blessing were you given at birth for that?”

5568453 LOL amazing, to be honest though when it's fluttershy's turn, a few friends of mine and I thought it'd be absolutely HILARIOUS if Fluttershy raeped Sombra, just a thought for the Fluttershy chapter.

I for one welcome our new dark overlord King Pimpbra.

As for the next chapter, I have seen/read enough ero to believe the strongest most physically imposing characters are always the most submissive and sexually weak. In no time Applejack will be licking Sombra hooves lovingly and calling him "Master" with utter devotion and desire.

Say what what you will but this story gets a down vote for most of it's major plot points being some of the most overused cliches in the entire fandom. And I do not mean to offend anyone that enjoyes this story or helped in making it. But I might just read some of it.
But Rarity dosn't really strike me as one that likes to be dominated. But I guess it's your story.

Will this story ever be updated...?

5628619 Yes, it is my story. Thanks for noticing

Well i think it would be a bit odd if you didn't know it was.

*I

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yeeeeeeeeeeees

My friend was right about reading fanfics labled incomplete. You get invested in the story and then it never updates...

5804498 As you've learned from previous chapters, the story ends shortly after the sex scene. The chapter is 5499 words at the moment, and we are nearly done with the sex scene. My co-writer TOOWC hasn't been able to write as much, so work has been slow. My dearest apologies, thank you for your patience. And now, I leave you with a word from my sponsor.

*Reads story*
She pregnant?
She pregnant.

Can't wait for the this one to continue.

Moar?

I'm honestly not surprised by the amount of liquid sombra can force himself to eject. It is a simple application of magic that he is using, along with the magic colouring it so. The only thing I see wrong here is the amount of hydration he would need after filling a BATHTUB WITH CUM. He should be a walking husk right now.

But regardless this is still very well done.