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Nice
Is that going to be it, because, damn, you keep adding more stuff onto this chapter.
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There's actually a little more that needs to be added to the chapter before it's really finished and I start on a new one.
5789135 Wonderful
I'm interested to see where this goes.
I can't go on. It was really nice in the beginning, but then he not only pours his heart out to strangers that hospitalize him, but completely forgives them outta no where, then gives them something to hold over him (ear scratches). This stiry officially funnels in to the generic HiE trpoe where the MC is a completr doormat. The whole "I'm a bit of a dick" personality that has been worked towards in the first chapter is already dissolved and it is just too sad to see another story crash and burn. The consistancy between the characters' attitudes/personality is bad and frankly everything from this chapter on is going to be contradictive. I quit this story.
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what this guy said
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Nothing more to add
I have one complaint all your characters are fucking bipolar one second he is all angry tough guy and the next he is a soft fuzzy forgiving kitten.
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IT'S SO FLUFFY I COULD DIE
“Homo Sapiens”
Two words, not one.
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Nono, you wrote it wrong, it's "Homo Spaiens"
Hurm....
So far this is different. Normally I dislike the AIE, JIE stories (Asshole in Equestria, Jackass in Equestria) but this one so far is different. It's a Teenager In Equestria story, with absolutely everything that it entails. I'm absolutely loving this.
This story here is entertaining, and I'm looking forward to seeing just how the equestrians handle the most chaotic creature in the multiverse. The human teenager, and all the Angry, pissy, depression, and stubbornness that comes with it. (did you know my spell check considers pissy offensive, while suggesting that I replace it with pussy? )
To quote the Radio Demon: "Ah, the memories."
This looks to be a fun ride.
My only mild nitpick, so far, is that I think the age 14-15 would fit the behavior better than 17. 17 is when people start mellowing out because that's when they start getting real control of their life and decision-making. But that's only a minor nitpick
The Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze