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As I said in your other story, the ponies really just need to get over themselves, especially Rainbow and Luna, I don't like using this word, but they are just straight up cunts
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Actually, him being crazy will be relevant as the story progresses. Though I can't say for certain for the chapters that are out now but as things begin to happen you'll see why I have set him up this way.
Betrayal and verbal abuseā¦ that's it? I was expecting physical and/or non-physical torture, perhaps some rape.
By non-physical torture, I mean proper mental/emotional torture as what actually happened can be classified as torture.
It has been over a month since I read this, so be aware that I might be forgetting some crucial information.
6481722 You might have to look into the next few chapters, I'm not sure I've been trying to get Darkness' Light back up and running to remember the details of all of them seeing how I've had these chapters completed for about a month before publishing them.
Though there might be something that may have been by anyone else who was expecting the same thing. David has already been tortured enough to where it doesn't affect as it should. If anything even if I had made scenes that involved some hardcore torture he wouldn't care seeing as he's gone psychotic though I believe I've mentioned that several times in the story, but again not completely sure.
wonderful as always. he should write more. quiet, it takes time, effort and the approval before a new chapter can be added.
Nice Chapter