David "The Hurricane" Schneider is a human living in Equestria. He earned his nickname by being ejected into Equestria during one of its worst hurricanes in centuries.
I feel like this story has little build up and character development, in my opinion this kills the atmosphere you are going for. You have the skill to articulate but lack in ideas/and, or drive to write this. -Something millions of people like me have issues with-
I would reccomend a basic plot line of major events, then expand as needed. Ie. Details and more plot points. -This is what most writers use for arc alignment, then start the draft to see if they even want to write the book/story-
I hope this helps?
Then again, this IS an old story you may already be alot better at writing.
woot woot way to go spitfire and David now that is how to start a family.
harts fire
Well that was fast.
I feel like this story has little build up and character development, in my opinion this kills the atmosphere you are going for. You have the skill to articulate but lack in ideas/and, or drive to write this. -Something millions of people like me have issues with-
I would reccomend a basic plot line of major events, then expand as needed. Ie. Details and more plot points. -This is what most writers use for arc alignment, then start the draft to see if they even want to write the book/story-
I hope this helps?![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Then again, this IS an old story you may already be alot better at writing.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
¿Madre soltera de 3? XD