David "The Hurricane" Schneider is a human living in Equestria. He earned his nickname by being ejected into Equestria during one of its worst hurricanes in centuries.
I have to say, as much as I like the clop, I think Derpy shouldn't have been his first. He has kindly refused every offer prior, yet he goes to Lotus to ask what to do? To me, that was kinda unrealistic. Even if he had sex with one (or both) of the Spa Sisters before, I could see him asking. This is just my opinion.
5417296 Thanks for not trashing it. That has happened way too much. I'm glad to hear your input. It was only an intro, the real love story begins in the 3rd or 4th chapter.
5417330 No problem. I just found these two statements:
I was an instant hit with the community and more than once ended up in a rather sexual situation, I was chaste though, and kindly refused.
Whenever this happened, and that was quite often, I had to talk to Aloe or Lotus about what to do. Whether it me restraint or if I should just pleasure her, which I had done many times, but I had never banged a client before.
Somewhat contradictory. How could he be pleasuring mare while being chaste?
I have to say, as much as I like the clop, I think Derpy shouldn't have been his first. He has kindly refused every offer prior, yet he goes to Lotus to ask what to do? To me, that was kinda unrealistic. Even if he had sex with one (or both) of the Spa Sisters before, I could see him asking.
This is just my opinion.
5417296
Thanks for not trashing it. That has happened way too much. I'm glad to hear your input. It was only an intro, the real love story begins in the 3rd or 4th chapter.
Good start good start.
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Thanks!
5417330 No problem. I just found these two statements:
Somewhat contradictory. How could he be pleasuring mare while being chaste?
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell, that escalated
very, no, extremely quicklyBut, otherwise s'okay.