Luna had gotten her wish. An entire city to rule as she saw fit. It was Celestia’s test. A test to see if she had truly reformed. A test to see what kind of ruler she could be. She quickly found out. Welcome to Luna's city of eternal night.
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Defintely worth the wait. That chapter was awesome.
You refined the protagonists further and advanced in the story at the same time.
Also introducing this hight-tech facility and hinting that it may have a few dark secrets is adding tremendously to the immediate suspense of the story.
I said it before and I repeat it. Your story telling is incredible. It's so immersive, it's always a pleasure to read.
I'm beginning to become very confused as to why this story didn't have thousands of views. It's certainly good enough so far.