Ever since humans began settling down in Equestria, Celestia has been pushing to merge both societies to learn from one another. For college sophomore Walter Barnes, this little "push" has caused more chaos than harmony.
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I admired that twist ending you put in the story.
...Erh...What shall i say with this..
Did I miss something?
At the end of the last chapter, Chrysalis already teleported away with Walter. Now, at the beginning of this one, Walter is hauling ass trying to dodge all three mares.
What happened between the end of the last chapter and the end of this chapter?
5489667 He took off running after breaking free from the grip that AJ and RD had on him, should I do a little more detail in it?
5489670 This is the last thing that happened in the last chapter:
This is the first thing that happened in this chapter:
Does this make sense as to why I am a little confused? Or is it just me?
He probably jump mid teleport and ended outside and started running
At the end oooh I can practically feel the shit storm to come
5489712 From what I gathered/guessed is that he had either a fling or a one night stand with Chrysallis and she got knocked up from it.
............Ow............ I think that last twist gave me Whiplash,
and now to return to my regularly scheduled laughter...
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5489763 That's not what I am questioning. I am questioning what happened between the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this chapter.
And then when we think it's a twist it ends up being chrysalis messing with Walter. Who would think of that hm?
My best guess of Walter's reaction at the end:static.carthrottle.com/workspace/uploads/comments/1120819-jpg-53ad5e9b41452.png
That's... surprising.
dun dun dun lol
Dramaaaaaa!!!!
5489964 ...I done Fucked up Dx I must have gotten confused... Sorry Dx
This chapter is something unexpected indeed… I had a good opinion about this story, but I don't think I will follow this story anymore… there is basically no plot.
5489964 ...I done Fucked up Dx I must have gotten confused... Sorry Dx
5489712 I Fucked up ;_;
Okay, This was definitely different. It matches up though. Poor Walter has just received a major shock. Will he still be in for one more?
I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!!!!!
I'm about to enter a comment about the kid before the chapter was revised, then I realize it was revised and the kid isn't there anymore
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5494680 Iz okay.
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PLOT TWIST IS TWISTY!!!
My my Chrissy, you work FAST.
Exactly! That's why I live with no emotion whatsoever! None!
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If Chrysalis had sexaul activities with Walter when he was 17. Wouldn't that make Chrysalis a petafile, since Walter was not a adult back then?
5490043 i would agree
run bitch runn
stayclassy
*record scratch* WHA?
Now, I understand that for story reasons he can't just say "okay". That won't prevent me from calling him a fool for it, though.
And I think you need to brush up on biology. That's not how immune systems work.
6134608 exactly.