Ever since humans began settling down in Equestria, Celestia has been pushing to merge both societies to learn from one another. For college sophomore Walter Barnes, this little "push" has caused more chaos than harmony.
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We some chapter. Like how he and Chrysalis get along.
I like this story. A man believing he is surrounded in darkness finds himself with souls that give off life changing light. And hot college sexual hijinks. The story has it's serious moments and funny ones as well. It's nothing special but your story has got my like and fav dude. Cant wait to read what happens next.
Bravo friend. I guess there are brakes in the rape train
Dude, this shit is amazing! I love this story so much! XD Keep up the good work!
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Chrysalis wanted to see Walter's dark side and she did. Oh boy, did she! What's the old saying, oh yeah, 'Be careful what you wish for, you just might get it.' Meanwhile, are we going to pan into what the girls are doing or we're not going to see them until they burst into the changeling hive?
5550239 I was debating on that
5558500 *Shrugs* I honestly didn't expect it to blow up like this, thus the reason the plot is a bit stupid. Plus, I'm not an experienced writer. None of my chapters are previously planned out and are improvised on the spot, which would explain missing holes in the 'plot', if one were to call it that. I'm honestly not that good of a writer, I'm not going to deny it. I simply see this as a way of improving my skills of writing and etc. Thank you for your constructive criticism, as apposed to the vast quantity or asinine adolescents that probe this website with the wanderlust of pissing someone off, or being a complete and utter dick, so again I thank you for your kindness. If anything, I see "Roommates" like a game of improv. There's no real solid plot line, anything can happen, since I base most of my writing skills from roleplaying. I think my problem is, is that I just can't do multiple chapters; I'm more (decently) skilled in one-shots, or just putting stories in one singular 'chapter', I guess you would put it. I apologize if this story isn't necessarily appealing to your taste, once again, I did not expect it to blow up like it did.