In the Everfree Forest
Twilight Sparkle is very worried. Princess Celestia is missing and Nightmare Moon has return to bring in ever lasting night. The only hope lies in the Elements of Harmony, which are in the dreaded Everfree forest. She also has to deal with five other ponies that decided to tag along with her, but having more of them would increase the their chances of getting through the forest. Then they all heard a sound.
“Argh!”
“W-what w-was that,” questioned the timid pegasus called Fluttershy.
“Ah don't know sugarcube,” replied a southern accent one known as Applejack.”
The tomboyish pony called Rainbow Dash said “It sounds like is coming from over those bushes.”
The six ponies head straight towards the bushes where the sound became louder.
“ARGH!”
They move past the bushes where they saw a strange grey male alicorn wearing strange armor lying on the ground. They were silence, not knowing what to do. Then the hyperactive pony, which is named Pinkie Pie, broke the silence.
“Oooh! Who is this new pony? Is he related to Princess Celestia? I never seen any male alicorns before, maybe we can be best fri-“ said Pinkie Pie as she was cut off by an annoyed Rainbow Dash.
“I must say, he looks like he more related to Nightmare Moon with that dreadful outfit,” said the prissy unicorn known as Rarity.
Twilight agrees with Rarity about the fashion This pony is a male alicorn, which is impossible since the only alicorns in the entire world are Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, and Princess Cadance, her old foal sitter. The armor the alicorn is wearing looks menacing with spike shoulder pads, a strange purple cylinder object on his right fore hoof and a strange helmet that looks like he is wearing a bucket on his head and it covered his purple mane. His chest armor seems to have a strange menacing purple horned bird face on it and the same symbol appears to be his Cutie Mark. This alicorn is far more intimating than Nightmare Moon and he is not even awake.
Then suddenly, the alicorn started to wake and Twilight could see his eyes. They were pure blood red with a white circle indication the pupil. Twilight admits his eyes just make him scarier than he already is.
“Where am I?” the alicorn spoke in a deep, raspy, menacing voice.
The alicorn tried to stand up on to hooves, but fell back down. The alicorn, than saw Twilight and the others and then look at himself. He stood up with all four hooves this time.
“Interesting turn of events,” he said.
Besides the little fall, the alicorn still seem intimidating, but Twilight got the courage to ask him who he was.
“E-e-excuse me s-sir. “
The alicorn shifted his gaze towards her. Twilight almost lost her nerve when she saw those red eyes. She felt like she was seeing a demon straight from Tartarus, but she knew continue to talk.
“J-just who are you?”
“I am Megatron. Do not worry, I am only here by accident and have no hostile intentions on this world. I just need to where I been transported to?”
Twilight does not know whether to believe him or not. He seems to be friendly, but he looks like he could easily take over Canterlot.
Then Rainbow dash got in his face. “How do we not know your secretly working for Nightmare Moon and preventing us from getting the Elements of Harmony?”
The others were scared on what this alicorn could do to Rainbow Dash. They were scared that he would attack, but nothing seems to happen. The alicorn looked like he was confused and a little annoyed by Rainbow Dash.
“Who is this Nightmare Moon and what are the Elements of Harmony? As I said, before I am not from this world, I was transported here by accident.”
Twilight just remembered that she must deal with Nightmare Moon and return the Sun.
“Mister Megatron, I am sorry but we must be going. If you head that direction,” she pointed her hoof to the trail that leads out of the forest, “You will reach Ponyville. After were done, we will have all our questions answered.”
She than ran off in the opposite direction and the others followed her, leaving a confused Megatron.
“The sooner I get out of the forest, the sooner I can learn what planet I am on.”
“AAAHHH!”
Megatron hear the scream in the direction the others went.
“It sounds like they need my assistances.” Then Megatron headed towards the others.
Megatron and redemption?! Is such thing even possible?
I am looking forward to reading this.
5288084 How's this?
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I am intrigued by this, I would love to see more.
So far, interesting but, if you don´t mind, i´d like to point some problems:
Parts of the story are missing. Like here:
Either something is missing or something is off. You need help editing some parts.
My second concern is how you´re adressing Megathron. In the end of Transformes: Prime he did not turned in a good guy. He just saw that all his actions only caused the fall of his beloved Cybertron (and it was pretty clear that, despite being evil, he DOES love Cybertron and his people) and he came to understand what his actions caused to his people. But this does not mean he becomes a good person....err, robot....errr, whatever. But it would make a lot of sense if he starts a quest to recover his honour and find a purpose to his life.
Great idea turning him in a alicorn, can lead to very interesting development.
And, sure, it is YOUR story. If you want to make a lovey-dovey Megathron, I have no right to criticize you. Just pointing that, for me, in my shit opinion, his character would be different. Less wilingly to help.
Have a thumbs up and a tracking, since i think this have potential.
...There is NO redemption for Megatron
One does not simply get forgiven after causing a war that literally went for MILLIONS of years!
5288462 Optimus would greatly disagree with you. Any version of Optimus, actually.
5288462 Much agreed. So much death and devastation caused by his hand. Such cruelty and disregard for the enemy. Maybe Optimus is willing to give him a chance, but he's just one transformer (even if the leader of autobots). Optimus was always a little gary stuish.
5289117 that's true anuff expect maybe the animated Prime he's a little less forgiven then most , most autobot leaders would forgive exept Ginri (master force) bansiment would be the least he would do, that's the one thing i like about him he can get angry or sad ... prime less so
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"After aeons of conflict, I finally see the truth in your words, Megatron...this universe, no matter how vast will never be big enough for you and I to coexist." - Optimus Prime
Then he delivers a sick uppercut to Megatron's smug bitch face
Ha ha G1 Buckethead Megatron reference.
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All beings in the universe, even Megatron, deserve a chance at remption. No matter their pasts.