Mike Schmidt. One of the humans roaming on equestria took a job at the family friendly pizza dinner Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. This will lead to mis adventures with him amd the five others.
Oh! Sorry, I didn't see you there. Hey, are you looking at that nice piece of bandwagon pie? I know I am!
Say, would you like some? All you have to do is write about a story using a overused and boring concept! Wait a second... You already did! Enjoy the pie, my friend!
While not being as, ahem, direct as 5294429, (s)he is right: this is a bit too cliche. My recommendation is to have an editor look at your whole outline before you continue. Things can be fixed...you just need to have people assist you with that.
Damn. I want to review this but i'm a little nervous that i'm gonna see a jump scare. (Not sure if the authors are still able to add pics in their stories)
Thank you for the people who are giving me some advice, but I kinda wrote this story because it was the only thing popping into my head. I'm not expecting for this to get a lot of likes. I'm just typing up new chapters when my mind just says "hey make a new chapter for this only." So while this story is going on, I'm typing my other stories that I haven't gotten to for at least a couple of months. (Counter Strike Global Offensive may have something to do with the delay of chapters as well) so read it. If you don't like it I'm ok with that. Well see ya next time.
Ok so for the people who said they wanted Foxy and Bonnie to be male I literally flipped a coin. One side mal other female. They both landed on female so I decided to make Golden Freddy and Freddy the only two males other than Mike.
interesting.
i like it.
Edit: lol, people can't take opinions. *shrugs*
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Oh! Sorry, I didn't see you there. Hey, are you looking at that nice piece of bandwagon pie? I know I am!
Say, would you like some? All you have to do is write about a story using a overused and boring concept! Wait a second... You already did! Enjoy the pie, my friend!
While not being as, ahem, direct as 5294429, (s)he is right: this is a bit too cliche. My recommendation is to have an editor look at your whole outline before you continue. Things can be fixed...you just need to have people assist you with that.
Please make Freddy some what evil, like an old grumpy person
Damn. I want to review this but i'm a little nervous that i'm gonna see a jump scare. (Not sure if the authors are still able to add pics in their stories)
Thank you for the people who are giving me some advice, but I kinda wrote this story because it was the only thing popping into my head. I'm not expecting for this to get a lot of likes. I'm just typing up new chapters when my mind just says "hey make a new chapter for this only." So while this story is going on, I'm typing my other stories that I haven't gotten to for at least a couple of months. (Counter Strike Global Offensive may have something to do with the delay of chapters as well) so read it. If you don't like it I'm ok with that. Well see ya next time.
5294429
If you get a piece of pie for writing a bandwagon story, I think it's time I do a Fallout: Equestria story!
this is really good, i hope to se mkore chapters in the furture way to go bro
5294758
Don't bother yourself with a small piece, my friend! I know of a big pie... A huge one ripe for the taking!
Cards Against Humanity.
Shh, I never told you anything. Now go! Go make shitty stories for the masses for that nice piece of pie!
Its Neh I like it but ya know its a nice story got nothing else to say other than
5294670 Nice shark tits.
Lol.
Oh boy!
Guess that means I should update my story.
Thanks, enjoyed the chapters. Be sure to update!
Heh. I wrote a one-shot yesterday with that cover art.
5295551 Everyone knows me for those now :0 So next time you see Shark Tits you know its me :3
5296184 Okay, have to do this.
5296072 E621???
Ok so for the people who said they wanted Foxy and Bonnie to be male I literally flipped a coin. One side mal other female. They both landed on female so I decided to make Golden Freddy and Freddy the only two males other than Mike.
Oh. My. Luna. This... This is the funniest fanfic on FNAF other than five minutes at freddys. Join the roupand add this. Please.
this story is allright at least there no elements or cealestia fuckin mike story gets thumbs up from me