Not a new chapter, but an update!
The rewrites are done, so please read and post comments!
Know that if you have sent me Changeling OC ideas, they will be featured in the new chapters as the first sparks of war are lit! Don't expect the Changelings to win every battle, as even a superior overconfident army can lose against an foe backed into a corner fighting for survival.
And don't worry about Celestia's behavior. She will become a better ruler as time goes on!
Also, the humans will appear sooner than later. I mean, they did get observed by rather aggressive sect of humanity and is going to 'test' the Changelings' own capabilities as they are inheriting a rather controversial line of equipment used by... you know the kind.
This Chapter will remain here as an divider from the Rewrites and New Chapters!
BTW, keep sending me new hive ideas as one cannot have too much!
I mean I am planning another story involving two more hives that I had commissioned long ago.
Desert of the Damned (Can you imagine Equestria trying to deal with Gaalsien Tech from Homeworld: Deserts of Kharak?)
https://www.deviantart.com/imperatortitan5046/art/Changelings-of-the-Desert-593889772
Synthesia: The Advent of Hope (Ar Tonelico since I absolutely LOVE that franchise. This one might be last seeing as it is... incredibly convoluted in their lore. Also, try learning Hymmnos, their exclusive song-language made for their JRPG games, as I have been two years ago. Still can't grasp it fully...)
https://www.deviantart.com/imperatortitan5046/art/Changelings-of-Songs-592740549
https://www.deviantart.com/imperatortitan5046/art/Linkage-Armor-for-Changeling-Queen-Musica-592741362
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H-how did you even come to the final conclusion that it was Jade Falcons?
But really... They are copying the Lyran Commonwealth and guess who they border!
Last time I read this story it was before the rewrite, wasn't like Gundam before, but now that it's Battletech I definitely need to catch up.
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sorry about the random change in direction, but it was being a bit BS with an entire anti-magic field from some mysterious electronic-disrupting field. At least a PPC, firing ionized particles could somewhat explain the anti-magic thingy
Man, this was one of my favourite stories before the rewrite, I can't wait to read the improved version!
Please do Synthesia,, I have loved Ar Tonelico for a long time, 100% cleared the first two. Though wasn't a big fan of the style change for three.
My favorite part being between Croix and Jacli/Mir
I have a question regarding the appearance of humans, will it be a peaceful contact or will it be hostile? because I have one or two suggestions on both aspects, um ... of course if you don't mind.
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Oh, a romance between a pony and Synthesia so the song could work??? So... Many... Possibilities!!!!
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It's a Clan. They will do dumb shit for honor's sake.
Like a famous man said, "this was in itself, bidding forces for an order of battle in order to out-honor the honorable honor for honor's sake. Honor on the side, hold the honor with extra honor."
Which describes the Clanner scum rather well.
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I looked through the Wiki on the Lyran Commonwealth and would it happen to be the Federated Suns or the Federated Commonwealth?
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well then, the Lyran Alliance was known at one point as the Lyran Commonwealth and would be renamed as such. The Fed Com is when they were united for a brief period.
I think.
Not at my computer to check lore data....
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yea fed com was when they were united
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I went and looked at the humans from the chapter. they have to be one of these clans.
Clan Smoke Jaguar Ruled out, destroyed.
Clan Ghost Bear Ruled out, no Aegis class WarShips.
Clan Wolf Ruled out, no Aegis class WarShips.
Clan Jade Falcon Ruled out.
Clan Nova Cat Depending on time frame maybe Partially destroyed and operating as Spirit Cats.
Clan Steel Viper Depending on time frame may be Destroyed.
Clan Diamond Shark Depending on time frame maybe operating as Clan Sea Fox.
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oh its one of them alright. Just... don't rule them out so quickly.
The year for the Inner Sphere will be revealed eventually, but noticed that the man was upset by the images and vids of 'past' events that made him upset.
Now, look at what mechs are being operated by the Changelings when they 'attacked' Crystal City.
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Nova Cat or one of its delineations seem most likely as they had 9 Aegis class under their control.
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I'm going off details they are in an Aegis class so it has to be a Clan that operated at least one and you ruled out Jade Falcons. its also post Word of Blake Jihad, which puts it after 3081.