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Well the CMC out shot flash in M.S sim training man de will by toppilot in no time
and the zeon corp name has u nice ring too it
5632372 IT gets better I won't spoil it but let's just say CMC Lunching.
5632379 O dis is gowing too by fun i si it all reday the CMC Drill sargenant's
I enjouyed the ending to this chapter, using certain residuals as fuel... always seems a bit surprising when that comes up
anyway a couple more points out of what I believe to be miss spellings, not going to post anymore for a bit. just let me know if its getting to annoying or you would prefer them be mail instead.
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All opposed." asked Twilight
Jay raised his hand with a frown. But he didn't get a vote in this so he was ignored.
"Then approved." Said Twilight. "I'll have Spike send copies along to Luna and Celestia."
"I wounder if I can get heated seats in my Zaku?" asked Rarity
wonder
As he entered he was as always met with mixed greetings of ponies that welcomed him or the under the breath comments of those how didn't. The house of nobles is mostly all the old bloodlines of the three tribes that became the ruling party before Celestia and Luna appeared. They plus fresher blood of new noble lines that had popped up over the year's serve as the court advisers and administrators to the princesses. There power outside of that and votes was limited to there businesses. That said many owned some very big companies.
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"We imagine if they made armor of it in theory they would be protected from magic attacks. And weapons made from it might be able to brake magic shields. So if we run in to a foe that has similar or superior to this would undermine Equestria's entire defense plan as well so chaos and panic if effected the civilian population." said Priest
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He was shocked at the sight space clear as day a planet to his right a Sun far away and ships hundreds of them trading fire in complex battle lines a warning flashed in the suit he started to look around and move then a gold light filled the screen and the a exposition field his ears and gravity returned the words 'YOU ARE DEAD' flashing in his face. And inside he realized what just happened. He just failed a test four fillies with out cutie marks passed.
So many grammar errors!