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I have to say your writing has gotten better. However I've notice an error here and there, but it's minor. If you need a beta reader or someone to help edit your work I can do it. Just send me a PM and we can discuss it from there.
5898675 lol I have two editors know all ready plus I read over it a final time. Then again I use American English not British English.
5898739 I never said anything about British English. and I see you have enough editors. Sorry to waste your time. Have a good day.
5898769 I just assumed you ment about how some wards are used and spelled different in America and Briten. And that you where from the other side of the pond and saw what is correct here as in correct there. That was minor mistakes. Another possibility is you mistaking dialectical tics from when ponies or others talk as mistakes. Also I write like I talk so my writing has a what if heard would be a USA, Maryland, hills, accent. So some things sound right to me but to others sound off. On top of a out dated glitchy kindles auto correct I have to fight with when writing. Plus my Aspurgers is a handy cap as well.
5898880 then in that case, continue on what you are doing. Your story is quite interesting and the characters are funny and entertaining to read. Keep up the good work.
5899600 thanks please up vote if you haven't all ready and help over turn the haters that just down voted with out giving it a fare chance when it was first posted.
5899642 I would up vote if I can vote twice, but I'm only limited one vote sadly.
5898675 really wat i miss meng? if i missed it i probably thought is was right so let me know ya?
Well i wil not mess with Maud se crackt skull's open like wallnut's all in all good chapter
this chapter wow also it seem storm troopers have been replace watch out rebel scum the royal guards will get you.
5903384 haha thank you that is exactly what I was going for there
5901203 thanks I hope you like the next chapter as well
5903513 You can count on it
Sometimes I forget Maud could punch out juggernaut. It really !makes !e wonder what her Equestria Girls version could do. Did they ever show us that?
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lol yeah