The story is good hes u good story line and i love it as for the down vote
let damn you get up vote from my

5321238 lol cute thing with words you did. Did my editor mess something up?

5310890 lol New chapter up.

No so far i can se now no mess ups
i reread all my fave story on u day to day bases my engles stil rusty
som time type som thing wrong

5322175 it's ok I speak English and my spelling is rusty.

5322625 Good to now Speaking english i em good type i not
sins read dis story i have dusting off my old Zaku model and gundam Heavyarms model

5322770 get the new gunpla kits you can combine them in to one machine the Zaku Heavy lol