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I hope you know that Beating the Heat is the name of a much more famous MLP story on Fanfic (and maybe this site, haven't bothered looking) and you may want to rename it.

Otherwise good luck with the new story.

you got me interesting

This interest of mine.

It has been piqued.

Good start to the story, looking forwards to where you're going with this :)
Take a fave and a follow.

Pinkiesmile rating for this chapter: / 10

That time you girls get really horny because it’s the shot time you’re able to reproduce?”

No, it's the time they turn into mindless sex machines 'cause they're just some animals

5186761 I also have a story that has 'Beating the Heat' in its name.

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Well, I didn't mean to copy anyone's story name by accident, it just so happens to be the first thing I could think of based on the situation in the story.

By the way, loved your heated situations story

5187523 Its nothing to worry about in the slightest. It is perfectly alright if several stories have a similar title and you want to use it, although my I'm going to go out on a limb and say that it may or may not account for the majority of dislikes.

And thank you for having enjoyed my story!

Yours gets an upvote and fav.

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haha, you have no idea how it feels to get a upvote and a fave from a clearly better writer :) also, any chance of you pming me the art for Friendship lesson?

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Its not about being better as much as knowing what you are doing. I've even had Akumokagetsu comment on my Lunar Domination story.

I'll send you the cover art when I wake up. It is 1:30am and I'm in bed on my phone haha

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haha okay, Well I hope you enjoy this fic, though I doubt it will have a scene as saucy as heated situations

So is twilight going to Induce the heat in hersef? and is she going to turn richard into a woman or a mare?

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She's going to simulate the sensations experienced when in heat in Richard, and if he loses the bet by trying to give into the heat, he gets turned into a mare for a week

5187560 be careful that can get rapey

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Oh don't worry

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Let the epic fails commence.
Enough said.

Holy shit Twilight was awful molesty looking when she licked her lips, how drunk was she when she thought this up?

5191643 It's just a mechanism for this story. It's not the whole story :D

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Meh, I just needed an environment where it made sense for Twilight to make a stupid bet.

Take ice baths three timrs a day and stay home

5192242 ?

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I have no idea why you're saying what your saying :p

Also when sitting at home use a i bag and put it on your gentals to kerp from feeling the heat

I know he won't win, but I want him to

I feel like he died a little inside

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Aka a fillyfooler.

This should be entertaining.

You want to now how you can tell if you're a coward, be intimidated by a small purple nerdy talking horse.

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Our souls clamour for the triumph of our brethen
May spite fuel the flames of his will