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I forgot this story even existed. Glad to read more tho
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Thanks, eager to try and keep progressing this story :)
Gotta admit, I had forgotten about this one... my only defending statement is that Diablo 2 Ressurected came out about a week ago, and I've been spending a majority of my time there.
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Well, thanks for coming back. Hope this chapter was ok.
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Oh, I am looking forward to more.
Life happens. I'm just glad a good story is getting finished. Quite a few don't.
Discovered the fic when you started updating it recently and I'm kind of disappointed you skimmed the last few days to the final hours. I was hoping to see how rough the final two days are in detail with him struggling to resist other Mares. Since this story has been going for years now, I understand wanting to finish this after so long.
This kind of bothers me you introduce something to help him, but because you must still have a chance for him to still lose in the final hours he only takes some during a time where it won't really help him. That's kind of anticlimactic and kind of bad writing. Perhaps, instead because he's a human it doesn't affect him as well, or have him stubbornly refuse to take it, but still go out and see Twilight.
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Thanks for the feedback, I will say regarding the tea that it's not quite what Richard thinks it is. His statement is from his pespective. But there's a reason Fluttershy gives it to him and he doesn't take Applejack's family brew.
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Oh you mean it's really a placebo effect? Ok that's makes things better.
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Yeah, there's a reason I mention a bad tasting tea with Applejack and Fluttershy earlier in the chapter :) She just realized that Richard might need a way to convince him to stop hiding.
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Only it wasn't really the tea that did it but her bringing up Twilight, meaning tea or no tea he still would have, but I get what you are saying.
Lol the cover is the same image I use for my profile pic
Honestly i hope it ends in a draw that way both parties learn something of important value. But if your twisting my arm and forcing me to choose sadly i have to choose Richard to win because Twilight started cheating the moment she listened to Rarity about seducing him to force him to lose the bet instead of playing fair. It is true he boasted and true he did downplay the pain both physical and mental a mare goes through during her Estrus and he did make lewd jokes, BUT he NEVER tried to go out of his way and seduce Twilight or try to get her pregnant with an unplanned child she wasn't ready for. Yet here is Twilight conspiring with Rarity to guarantee Richard looses a bet and force him to be a mare for a week.
Correct me if i'm wrong here wasn't the bet for him to experience what Estrus was like for a mare so he can learn empathy and understanding? Because right now isn't it EXACTLY what he is going through now BECAUSE of the bet? So what praytell would forcing him to lose and being transformed into a mare going to do for him besides humiliate and degrade him? How will being humiliated and degraded help Richard learn empathy and understanding, huh Rarity? IT F**KING DOESN'T RARITY!!! Just admit it Rarity YOU DON'T WANT TO HELP YOU WANT TO HURT AND DEGRADE AND HUMILIATE HIM BECAUSE HE HURT YOUR FEELINGS AND PRIDE you f**king b*tch! So you planned to get revenge by using Twilight's urge to win this bet against her and Richard. Element of Generosity my flank!!!
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Well, I will admit when I started the fic I wasn't a huge rarity fan, but the reality for her is she views this as a game, a way to live vicariously through Twilight because she loves romance and drama and the "pretty but doesn't realize it girl getting the guy" is kinda what she wants. Even if she doesn't expect them to end up together.
Im glad you're enjoying the story though.
Why are they acting like canceling the bet means admitting defeat when it simply means making it completely null and void. No one has to do anything and they can happily move on. I don't know seems like an excuse to avoid that kind of ending, though I can understand wanting to, since it's a huge copout.
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Well, pinkie is bet comissioner, she'd have to agree, and they're worried that she'd consider it a forfeit.
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And they can't ask her if it would?
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Well, Richard isn't thinking straight and neither is Twilight at the moment.
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true but it is still wrong that Rarity is helping Twilight cheat to win and force Richard to be transformed into a Mare when the bet itself is teaching him the empathy and understanding Twilight wanted him to learn. Forcing him to lose and be transformed won't help in teaching him the lesson Twi wants him to learn. It will do nothing but humiliate and degrade him. Even go so far as having Richard resent and hate Twilight and every mare in Equestria. Which will be really bad now, especially that Twilight is falling for him and he for her. If he is forced to lose and be transformed that little bit of love he has for Twilight will leave him or turn it into hate and loathing for her and any mare in the future. Sorry i ranted here but this hits me on an emotional level and not many stories makes me feel them as viscerally as this story does.
But yes i do like the story and feel proud you got such a reaction out of me.
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Well, I wouldn't want to spoil the ending, but the bet should be resolved next chapter. And hopefully it will lead to a pretty nice ending.
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The latest chapter is up by the way
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Yes, thank you so much, it really turned out to be perfect, a real sparkling one.
All in all, I would like to mention a few things I learned- liked about this story so far- a bit of a summary, if I may.
At the very start with that poker night and the way the bet was made and the way some characters - especially Twilight "behaved" there. I thought she is going to be a real b***, who would do anything to win the bet...
Looking back now, I'm so happy I was very wrong with that estimate there, because the complete opposite to that thought became true- or seems like that. Every character, especially the main ones I think was spot on and that's a big bonus to me with this story, because I really like to read so close- almost too in-real looking character build up, and I think we got that here, so thank you for that, that is one major reason I love this story so much.
This latest chapter while started delicately, that one-on one time with the revelation really surprised me, I thought you just going to make it in the usual way, like it happened so far, that we will have to wait longer for these two to reveal their inner- deep feelings for each other, I'm glad it finally happened to be honest.
In that last part, a big and important question come up.
Thinking on it overnight I come to the conclusion that my first thought should probably prevail here, I mean I had a thought for this at the start, that whatever happens ( at the time I didn't thought these two gonna hook-up) I would like Richard to win.
Mainly, because we know what would happen, if Twily wins, he would be a mare for a week- but seriously, would she be so evil to let that happen to Richard after all this? If I know Twilight well enough, then the answer is a No, she won't- do that.
So if Richard wins- although he already won something more than a silly bet... ;) I think he would be reasonable.
Can't imagine here for a minute that he would make Twilight do something here, that's evil or worse- after all this, but we don't know anything about his thinking so I would like to give him the benefit of a doubt here..
So, yeah, I really enjoyed this story, even though it really needed a "little" way to get this far, but STILL, this story at least get this far, and wasn't cancelled or abandoned like many others after a good or even better start.
Looking forward to see more, especially if a sequel is in the cards as well. :)
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Well, I will admit the story has evolved since it started, but for the last couple of years at least I've had the winner locked in and how it will go down, hopefully it will be sweet enough.
And thanks for the kind words.
Definitely planning for a sequel though it will be a lot more action than slice of life than this story.
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I'll also point out, Twi hasn't really revealed her deep inner thoughts yet, like she said, she can't say she loves him.
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I just realized even if Pinkie considers it a loss, Richard or Twilight could ultimately not decide to do whatever they agreed upon. There's nothing forcing them too, so they could still do that if they would talk about it, but of course this is meaningless, since you don't seem to gong that route. Still it's something to think about. Also, it has been quite a bit since an update. No rush but hope there's one soon.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Don't want to sound impatient or anything but I would really love to see what happens next, this cliffhanger is killing me.
Really hope that you are alright as well, it's been a while since we last heard from you. :)
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I deffo want to do some more soon, just always get my writing mojo back then lose it shortly after. What I can say is the next 4 chapters are planned.