At last, back home. The library was exsactly as she left it, not a single book was out of place and not a spec of dust extra. She carelessly dropped her saddle bag on the floor as she made her way up the stairs and onto her bed.
Ever since she was in hospital Spike had not been able to muster the will to speak to Twilight, mainly because of greif and guilt. But Spike had to concentrate if he was going to help Twilight back onto her hooves. After bringing the last of the cases into the library before making her favorite sandwich and putting it on a plate.
He made his way up the stairs, holding the snack in his claws before he saw Twilight, laid on her bed, looking out the window. Spike took a deep breath, pushing his emotions to one side before he walked up to the tired unicorn.
"T. ....Twilight?"
Twilight didn't answer. She looked distant, she was clearly not paying attention. Spike repeated, this time Twilight looked at him with a blank, emotionless look on her face. Spike then held the sandwich up to Twilight's face.
"I-I made you a sandwich. .... It's your favorite."
Twilight used her magic to take the plate out of Spike's hand and place on the end table next to her bed. She then turned back to her view outside the window.
"Come on Twilight. .... You gotta eat something. .... It's been four days. The doctor says it's important to keep eating while you recover."
Twilight continued to ignore Spike and it didn't take long for the silence to get to him. He sighed before walking up behind her.
"I am trying Twilight. I'm really trying hard here. .... But you keep blanking me out. Are you angry with me? .... Is. .... Is it because I told the princess where you were?"
Twilight's ears then flopped flat against her head. Tears began to drip onto the floor. Spike brabbed a nearby box of tissues before walking up to her.
"Twilight?"
"OF COURSE!! OF COURSE IT'S WHY I'M ANGRY!!"
Spike fell onto the wooden floor, dropping the box of tissues as Twilight stood over him.
"If you didn't run to the princess, crying like like a little baby, I'd still have a friend!! Just one friend!! .... Now I have nothing!! NOTHING!!"
Spike stood up and frowned before standing up to Twilight, staring the unicorn in the eyes.
"You cant blame that on me!! .... I didn't know what to do!! It was dark and no pony was there!! I thought you were dead!!"
Twilight stared with venom in her eyes, he was right, she couldn't blame him. It was cruel for her to do so. Keeping her stubborn attitude, Twilight turned away to the window. Spike then turned away, walking down the stairs. Before he walked out of sight she looked at Twilight, tears freely flowing from his eyes.
"I thought I saved you. .... Turns out the Twilight I knew died in that cave aswell. .... You've changed Twilight."
Spike made his way downstairs, Twilight looked at the floor, seeing her reflection in the glossy wood, Twilight could see herself staring back with a mad grin on her face. A sudden urge then kicked her in the chest. She couldn't control was about to say.
"You have no idea." Laughed the demonic voice.
MUST READ!!!!!!
oh shit! and so it begins nice man, niceeeee
5 Paragraphs from the end, replace 'was' with 'were'.
Im hooked
483008 Thank you :) Edited
Can't wait for next chapter.
Yay!? I'm not sure which one of my emotions I should convey. That's how good this story is! Keep it coming!
Poor poor twilight.............everyone has a little insanity inside, sealed away deep within their minds............some can control the insanity and use it at will.........some give in and let the insanity take full control of their body, mind, and spirit.
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there are only two conceivable to me based on what i have seen written of this and the other two stories.
ending #1: Twilight finds out whose responsible, torturously kills them, and goes on being insane and killing everyone everywhere.
ending #2: Twilight finds whose responsible, torturously kills them, and later dies from something. Death may include but are not limited to death by drowning, death by robots, death by justice, death by bad publicity, or death by penguins.
No hope of a satisfying ending where twilight is cured. Though if she dies somebody else may become insane such as celestia, or derpy, or the orphan formerly known as applebloom.
483612 At least Applebloom has Granny Smith :P
483696 That makes it so much better when neither of them can run the farm, seeing as grannysmith is too old and brittle to buck trees, and are of innapropriate ages to be hired and work for a living doing something else. There only hope is too have a member of their large family to take them in and care for them, or you could have twilight put them out of their misery. You might as well, i don't care who you kill anymore. rip off applebloom's ears it shall be amusing.
Misspelled 'Insanity" in your short description.
Kill the CMC!!! "Cutie Mark Crusaders: Murder Victims"
485188 cmc must die
You want to buy some cyber CupCAKeS now
by the way just a personnel preference but some people prefer smaller chapters like these just to be combined and the second one be a sub chapter or just completely merged with the first (i personally prefer 1000 words+ chapters)
SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
Uh oh! The symptoms have started! And so it begins!
486418 Thank you for poointing those out. :) I tend to go cank through parragraphs, seeing a place where I can add a sentance. I then get started forget what I was goint to write and then move on to something else.
As for calling Twilight a pegasus. .... I have no excuse.
What? What the hey happened to Rainbow Dash?
885973 She died, didn't you read Dawn of a Dying Pegasus?
Twilight....already insane once....super insane now...welp...better get the tombstones ready.
THIS SHIT JUST GOT REAL AND SO IT BEGINS
Spike you had 1 job 1 job be a good servant and you messed that up by ruining her life
3293742 Damnit Spike! If you're gonna do something! Do it right!