Let's hope that they don't rush their romance too much and do something stupid. Cute scene though. Babs is an awesome rapper! Did she take lessons from Pinkie?
afte they did it, Jacob goes to get a drink of water. But then he gets a call from pinkie and she scolds him about not cuddling with her, so he hangs up and does that. This isnt one of those stories where they fuck in maybe less than a chapter after they met. Hell, the original story that this was based on, I see Pink, had the Main character and pinkie have sex only at chapter 3, but this goes to chapter 5, so they can have a bit more time together just as friends
5030120 well i am fine with that, i just wanted to be sure what happend. The thing with the timeskip was more for the future, some fanfics are just skipping the time and suddenly everything is different. You haven´t done it yet, so i am more than happy to read more^^ You could say that i only want to make sure that i read a fanfic which doesn´t turned out bad suddenly, but i try to not want to much Well thanky you to explain it anyway, there is always something i am happy to know.
jacob and Babs will go against eachother soon. Also a rematch with Babs and Mixer and a double battle between Mixer and his homeboy and Jacob and Babs. Dogg doesn't rap, even though he's black and is obsessed with rap
Let's hope that they don't rush their romance too much and do something stupid. Cute scene though. Babs is an awesome rapper! Did she take lessons from Pinkie?
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She actually learned by listening to her Marshall Mathers LP album she bought in Chapter 2.
You do very great, but i just hope you don´t start skipping important things if you make a timeskip. jut for the future, till now it was ok.
Nice thing with the rap, even if i don´t like every kind of rap i think it was a nice chapter.
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afte they did it, Jacob goes to get a drink of water. But then he gets a call from pinkie and she scolds him about not cuddling with her, so he hangs up and does that. This isnt one of those stories where they fuck in maybe less than a chapter after they met. Hell, the original story that this was based on, I see Pink, had the Main character and pinkie have sex only at chapter 3, but this goes to chapter 5, so they can have a bit more time together just as friends
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It shows babs isn't just some pretty face and is actually tough and tomboyish like the show.
5030120 well i am fine with that, i just wanted to be sure what happend.
The thing with the timeskip was more for the future, some fanfics are just skipping the time and suddenly everything is different. You haven´t done it yet, so i am more than happy to read more^^
You could say that i only want to make sure that i read a fanfic which doesn´t turned out bad suddenly, but i try to not want to much Well thanky you to explain it anyway, there is always something i am happy to know.
Because it needs to be said....
Okay, maybe doesn't NEED to be said but I'm going to say it any.....
EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORYYYYY !!!!!!!!!
MIXER!
VERSUS
BAAAAAAAAAAAAABS SEEEEEEEEEEEED!
BEGIN!
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jacob and Babs will go against eachother soon. Also a rematch with Babs and Mixer and a double battle between Mixer and his homeboy and Jacob and Babs. Dogg doesn't rap, even though he's black and is obsessed with rap
Loved the way you wrote the rap scene, it was well excecuted.
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There's going to be lots more!
This chapter made me feel awkward because my Ocs name is Mixer
This chapter was spicy.