It's a very interesting story to be truthfull You didn't the the normal "hay I just met u an your hot so let's buck" You are really making these two characters bond And have a real intrest in each other These are the kinda stories I wish there were more of Can't wait for the next chap
5029706 I is really nice and there is nearly enough to see that they well at least like each other. It is interessting that you make them more real, even if it looks like a miracle right now.
I love the story and i start to like her, if they are alone i have nothing against it if you should decide to change her personality a bit, but i think she should keep her personality. Because i have seen a bit of their relationship i am ok with them having sex, but don´t overdo it okay? I don´t know what the others think, but i always don´t liked it, if they have two or three times sex in one chapter. And if you can, please make it a bit well cute, cuddle to or something like it. yeah i started to like a bit of the sweet stuff, cute like adoption storys and such.
I think i know he meant, normaly the characters barely know each other and have already sex, but here we could at least see a bit of their relationship befor anything else.
Nice chapter, very sweet.
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Which one? I rip on a lot of stories.
Quack.
It's a very interesting story to be truthfull
You didn't the the normal "hay I just met u an your hot so let's buck"
You are really making these two characters bond
And have a real intrest in each other
These are the kinda stories I wish there were more of
Can't wait for the next chap
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Thanks for the feedback!
Babs and Jacob need to start somewhere in their relationship. Hell, they don't even fall in love until a few chapters later!
though they do fuck in chapter 5.
5029706 I is really nice and there is nearly enough to see that they well at least like each other. It is interessting that you make them more real, even if it looks like a miracle right now.
I love the story and i start to like her, if they are alone i have nothing against it if you should decide to change her personality a bit, but i think she should keep her personality. Because i have seen a bit of their relationship i am ok with them having sex, but don´t overdo it okay? I don´t know what the others think, but i always don´t liked it, if they have two or three times sex in one chapter. And if you can, please make it a bit well cute, cuddle to or something like it. yeah i started to like a bit of the sweet stuff, cute like adoption storys and such.
I think i know he meant, normaly the characters barely know each other and have already sex, but here we could at least see a bit of their relationship befor anything else.
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Can't quite remember (but is that really a surprise?) all I can remember is that the poor sap had a create your own oc as his cover art.