When I first ordered that fully living and breathing Babs Seed from Vogon Biotech, I knew we would have an everlasting relationship together.
You switch from Spike's POV to Jacob's without telling the audience.
I turned to big mac and did the stupidest thing i had ever done.
Two missing capitals.
Then you switch to Celestia's without warning.
Glad to finally see an update! No offense. Keep it up!
5203218
The spike and jacob thing maybe. Celestia? No.
I'll fix it later.
*catching up on vogon stories*writing by yourself for now on. Ain't that bad. Do what I do:1.cry(important)2.write3.cry4. Insert bad joke that no one will get. (Optional)5. Cry again while editing. 6. Post.
You switch from Spike's POV to Jacob's without telling the audience.
Two missing capitals.
Then you switch to Celestia's without warning.
Glad to finally see an update! No offense. Keep it up!
5203218
The spike and jacob thing maybe. Celestia? No.
I'll fix it later.
*catching up on vogon stories*
writing by yourself for now on. Ain't that bad. Do what I do:
1.cry(important)
2.write
3.cry
4. Insert bad joke that no one will get. (Optional)
5. Cry again while editing.
6. Post.