May I suggest

Spike x luna

Or
Spike x dragoness oc
Or
Spike x aged up cutie mark crusader (spikealoo otp)

You could fix this up a little. The timing was a little too fast, you could've explained the Forerunner history and Spike's history a bit, and there are a few holes in the story, such as Twilight could teleport her scroll to Celestia, but she would waste a lot of energy, and Spike was kind of Out Of Character, or OOC for short. However, I like the story so far, so keep it up.

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Cannonly, Spike (biologically) was a few years younger than Twilight-since she hatched him as a foal.

However, he was "technically" a "baby" by dragon standards since he wasn't growing. Remember "Secret of My Excess"? How he "grew up"? Since he isn't hoarding, he isn't growing like other dragons, like say Garble.

Don't forget that the Librarian altered Spike's DNA, so that his body matches his (pony standard) biological age

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This is just a prologue, more Forerunner history will be covered.

Spike's character change was due to what happened to him: basically he had his heart crushed, and then was given (through verbal means) Forerunner knowledge, forced to age, armed, and given the monumental task of protecting a planet where some chaotic event happens nearly every week.

Right now, his heartbreak is making him want to isolate himself (I've seen it happen to friends) and the huge responsibility thrust upon him further isolates himself.

It'll take time and coaxing to get him to open up, but then he'll be more "grown up" than before becoming the Didact of Sacrifice.

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Actually, I'm open to explore any straight Spike pairing, but I like to ask the readers on what they think the pairing will be.

I'll actually be changing things after I do some work.

The choice will be either:

SpikexLuna

SpikexMoondancer

or
Spike x Twilight

4968985 I'm leaning towards Luna because of her past... but I'd kinda understand Dancer, but it'd feel more like a rebound girl... as for Twi, it'd feel like a cross between her using him to get info about them and a mother/son pairing...

but as to the story itself, I love it, even if I thought that he was given the stuff way too quickly and it seemed like he automatically knew what to do with all of it... plus, we don't know if Rarity's recanted or even learned what he was talking about yet, but that might be shown later...

4968953 Good point. Also, if you're gonna go do a pairing, I would suggest a female dragon in the story. I haven't seen one of those in a long time.

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Female dragon.....hmmm.....

I'll add that to the (currently) three pairing choices when I edit the profile/chapter to remove the "harem" option.

If she doesn't win, the dragoness will become an "older sister" to Spike.

I want to see SpikexLuna. I think they can identify with one another. Spike wanted to be loved by Rarity, and Luna wanted to be loved by her subjects.

i like twispike but there aren't enufe spike x moondancer fics out there crisis nova tride to do it but he dilited it

but maby you can have spike get both?

4969095 Sounds like a plan. I look forward to the next chapter.

4969095 I would go with Twilight or a dragoness

I'd go for either the Moondancer pairing or the oc Dragoness

Maybe a Spike x Luna, haven't seen one of those in a while.

I have an idea! What if Equestria is a "shield world" (like Requiem).

That would explain Why Celestia/Luna can control the sun/moon and still have gravity on the planet.

Honestly Luna or the dragoness.
With Luna there is a lot of things that can push them together.
Dragoness cuz same species and what not.
And when I saw this summary and title I was like uhnn I'm gonna enjoy this gonna keep an eye on this 1 you got a lot if themes I love.
1 it involves spike/ hopefully a badass one
2 he's a god damn beast now with the armor
3 a nice pairing choice all of em

Im gonna say Spike x OC Dragoness or luna, on a nether note hmm, very interesting i think i'll stick around

I recommend spike harem with moondancer luna and a dragoness oc

id go for number 4 spike x oc dragoness, and you should have the infinity arrive at the planet due to dectecting forerunner artifacts

Looks like everything is off to a good start. I would have to say either the OC dragoness or Moondancer. I would pick Luna but there is hardly any pairings with the other two and I feel that Twilight is better off as a sister or something in this fic.

This... intrigues me...

Spike x Twilight

He's the Didact of Sacrifice. No shipping for him! Whorehouse once ever 5 years but no shipping! Ok maybe a little of them all.

Plz spike x luna