Set in the Gentlemanverse and inspired by Aetherpony's "Wild Rose." Richard, a Gentleman for hire, is called upon to tend to the needs of Ponyville's resident rose vendor.
"No more pegasi!? Come on it was one little slip-up! It could have happened to anyone!" Ever Ring wasn't buying it,"You should have thought about that before you decided to include death-defying feats of aerial fornication to your list of hobbies. I know you have a reputation to maintain and all, but safety for the client and the gentleman comes first. You're a valuable investment Richie and I need you to stay close to the ground for awhile."
Many of my clients are pegasi; we just seem to really hit it off for some reason. I suppose they just appreciate a human that can tolerate risks. With a lifestyle that often includes the manipulation of weather or high-speed aerial acrobatics, you have to be a bit mental.
In any case I stand to lose a lot of money if this keeps up for too long.
"How long are we talking about here Eve? Long enough to worry about what I'm going to eat next week or long enough to worry about paying the rent?" Eve turned to look at me with a look of calculated calm honed from years of delivering Gentlemen the news that they were about to draw a nasty dose of KP duty and smiled. "My dear, dear idiot. How could you suggest your auntie Eve would let you go hungry?" With that she reached over and gave me a pinch on the cheek with her left fore hoof.
Two instances of different characters speaking in the same paragraph. Better break a few lines there to separate the perspectives.
Well, free time after Christmas, writer's block, and nothing to worry about, I am starting on this story (that if I recall correctly, you told me not to anymore as you cancelled). I'm not much of a reviewer, but I'll try to keep this fun, constructive, and as informative as ever.
First, I like the idea of gaining citizenship by working in an escort company. I laughed hard at that. And it's a very valid move and idea. I like.
Richard, I like his impulsiveness in the way it comes off from the narrative. Though it doesn't really build up anything, it's short, sweet, and gives an idea of the personality.
Ever Ring seems a little strange, but then again, this is an intriguing side of her.
Lastly, as I'm still in chapter one, I have no idea what the timeline is compared to GFM (or G4M). I guess I can work that out later. Or not. We'll see.
I have feeling I will hate Harry. If the first mention of him didn't tip off the type of character he is.
Is that why she had that stalker last chapter? Wait, she didn't order one like that until now, so... Is the stalker someone else? Or was all that just her fantasy and imagination leaking out?
This is good.
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Two instances of different characters speaking in the same paragraph. Better break a few lines there to separate the perspectives.
Hmm... Were you perchance inspired by a certain fic on this site?
Well, free time after Christmas, writer's block, and nothing to worry about, I am starting on this story (that if I recall correctly, you told me not to anymore as you cancelled). I'm not much of a reviewer, but I'll try to keep this fun, constructive, and as informative as ever.
First, I like the idea of gaining citizenship by working in an escort company. I laughed hard at that. And it's a very valid move and idea. I like.
Richard, I like his impulsiveness in the way it comes off from the narrative. Though it doesn't really build up anything, it's short, sweet, and gives an idea of the personality.
Ever Ring seems a little strange, but then again, this is an intriguing side of her.
Lastly, as I'm still in chapter one, I have no idea what the timeline is compared to GFM (or G4M). I guess I can work that out later. Or not. We'll see.
Immediate distrust of this "Harry" character... I'm liking it so far, lets see where this goes!
Well this is certainly gonna be different, and yet strangely familiar...
I have feeling I will hate Harry. If the first mention of him didn't tip off the type of character he is.
Is that why she had that stalker last chapter? Wait, she didn't order one like that until now, so... Is the stalker someone else? Or was all that just her fantasy and imagination leaking out?
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Rose didn't have an actual stalker last chapter.
I’m not into clopfics . . . but this one seems like a good read
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I am honored you think so! I hope this story stays in your favor to the end.
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Rose put way too much thought into this lol
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Agreed!