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iremember sending you a pm suggesting the midnight thing
3066721 That you did.... and I forgot that you did, dood.
Sorry about that, dood.
YES! Twin sex for the win!!!
There was a mistake by RD with "here me out" it should be "hear me out".
We need that chapter in the Mini-series now!
I gonna write more later, there was a couple stuff which didn't quite hit for me, but I'm not feeling to well to write another big comment.
It was a lovely chapter, thank you very much. :)
UPDATE
LOVED IT
Now I just gotta update my Rainbow Dash Story lol.
Ok you say Fluer is next, I don't see how that will work. You've just got Twilight at a point where she hates herself for giving in to other ponies advances, why would she give in again? especially as she has so many friends who'll help her with her own desires.
Ok, could still use a few small corrections, but good to see you got some editing done to a passable grade man.
Oh, and I guess you've figured out by now, but I have moved, and now have only my phone for email, sorry.
3066723
Great chapter, as usual, just one thing though,
Don't use *pant* like this, it breaks the fluidity of the sentence. Try instead,
Or some variation of that. Thank you for your time dude.
3067099 God dammit, dood...you made me think, so to spite you, I'm going to tell YOU that Cadance will be involved in helping Twilight along...she won't be anywhere near the actual sex but she and Twilight's family (brother and parents) will be involved with helping Twilight get back into the game, dood.
3067247 Well that's good, it'd be nice for Twi to become comfortable with her sexuality. Although her family are going to want to kill Lyra when they find out about how she's been treating Twi. (I know I do)
3067261 I revised the Lyra chapter (and all of Lyra's scenes) to make Lyra less of a douche-bag, dood. She's been a cool mare for a month or so now.
3067312 oh darn it, now I have to reread everything!
is it wrong of me to be really excited to read your latest chapter?
3068210 I'm not sure, dood... But I'm glad you are.
3069316 That's right, dood. and Thanks... I try not to let things die... I just write slow, dood.
God how I wish twilight wasnt sterile
3082014
Well if I understood her explanation right she isn't sterile, at least not with her 'male part', she'll just need a unicorn who knows the spell to reverse it and than she can go knock up every mare she has sex with.
3082014
Well in the spin-off, which so far has two chapters that did not happen and two canon to this story although one is set in the future, and in that one she Twilight manages to make Sunset Shimmer become pregnant, so chances are that Twilight will stop being sterile later in the story.
Celestia...
3084217 Actually, dood... all four stories are canon to this one:
The Mother's Day thing was a dream sequence and a reoccuring nightmare that Night Light (Twilight and Shining's dad) has about his wife with one of their children; I'm trying to hint to the readers that the Mrs. Cake thing DID happen but also try and mask it that it didn't so that you guys can choose whether or not Twilight DID fuck Mrs. Cake; you are right about Sunset and Dash though, dood.
Just thought I'd clarify, dood.
3084217
God yes!
3082534
Wait what? I know she can get pregnant but she can't knock other mares up. What you just said has confused me.
3087518
no she said that she could not bare children because of something happening because of her maleness and that her doctor use a spell which stops her from producing sperm so she can't impregnate another pony before she has it reversed. Go back and find the chapter where she explained it to her friends for more info.
3087543
Dammit
3092652
Did you find the chapter?
she tries to dig herself out but that hole just seems to get deeper and deeper
3120721 Makes for good reading though, doesn't it, dood?
3122638
very very good reading
Much, much improved over the last chapter in terms of readability. Still the occasional grammatical error, but overall, better. Bravo on making the sex in this one both a little hot and a lot endearing. Very sweet. Also, FINALLY getting to Fleur! Now I just have to ask if Celestia, Cheerilee, or Cloudchaser/Flitter are going to join in. I know Cloudchaser was in that one, but what about her and her sister at the same time? Also, also, Twilight needs to start putting some buns in those ovens.
3130120 Thanks, dood!
Celestia is a for sure deal...I even want to do a threesome with both Princesses, dood. Cheerilee is on the fence of being on this story or on the Mini-Series (which means she'll be written at some point, dood.) Flitter and CLoudchaser at once never crossed my mind actually, dood... so maybe?
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
3092652 So I take it you want Twilight to knock some ponies up, dood? Well...I think that's coming up soon with how I'm writing Chrysalis atm, dood...
Here is the skinny: Despite the fact that the new Chrysalis chapter will have Chrysalis as a member of Twilight's herd (and not someone who is going to trade sex for love with Twilight every few months), she will want to repopulate her kind after losing a lot of them to the Love Shockwave of the Canterlot Wedding, dood. So she will be pressuring Twilight into getting the sterilization spell reversed, because she needs Twilight's sperm to fertilize eggs then implant those eggs into other mares as Twilight doesn't want to be an incubator. Because Chrysalis wants this to be a reality...this may cause me to push the Fluttershy chapter to happening sooner rather than later, dood... since the Fluttershy chapter IS planned to have Twilight knock Fluttershy up with a foal.
Enjoy that sneak peak, dood.
3147935
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
3082014 she isn't sterile per say, just repressed. if she wanted to buck and have kids with the other mares she could easily have the doctors make the proper glands go back into action, then again she would be super virile and make both princesses pregnant chrysalis pregnant and almost everypony she mates with pregnant, the only exception I could think of is Gilda but that might end up transferring into the child being a hipogriff. the only part of her that actually is sterile is her vagina and mare parts, since she cannot have eggs and is unable to hold them inside her vagina.
Edit: reading later comments renders mine already explained so you can ignore this if you want.
3158500
That explains it! Thank you!
BUT POOR TWILIGHT CANT HAVE FOALS D:
3158820 The fact that Twilight can't birth foals was deliberate because I have a tendency to dislike anything that has Twilight as a 'receiver' of any form of coitus, dood (I don't downvoite because that's rude)... in other words, when I read Twilight clop, either Twilight grows a dick and uses it or it's pure lesbian sex, dood.
So it's a 'me' thing, dood.
3159020 Wait wait wait! so you're saying you don't like the fact that in 'After that Fateful Night' Nigthmare Moon knocked up Twilight?
3159606 I like the story, but I stopped reading it after Nightmare Moon gave herself a dick and used it on Twilight due to my own super high standards for clop involving Twilight...so yea, dood.
3159845 story's still good just that Twi is preggers wit h Nightmare's child.
Oh estimate on when you're next chapter will be out?
3160000 No idea...since I lack control over a proof-reader's ability to do their thing, espacially with some of the technical problems they have been running into...like moving or computer's crashing...I kinda just get the best luck, dood.
3160119 Thats why I have a large pool and send a massive message out to all of them and those that show proof read that way I can get the chapters out without difficulty. I mean what do you have the proof readers work on anyway, (ie grammar, spelling, ETC.)
3160439 I generally ask them about the standard stuff... despite English being my ONLY language...I ain't the best at it, dood... so I ask them to check for ANY mistakes...evidently the 'tenses' being my biggest problem... I also ask for thier opinion on the chapter, dood... though I don't commonly get one, dood.
3160626 If you want opinion I can give you one, a bit on the clinical side but if you wish I can help. But how do you do the editing and such?
3160698 I just change what looks... off, and then change the stuff that I missed that the proof-reader's caught... so yea, dood... isn't that the normal way of editing and what not?
Then again, some proof-readers edit it for me... which is cool, I guess, dood.
3160712 No no no, what do you have the editing over Gdocs, Email, what is your method of working over the chapters with the proofreaders?
do you send them a copy or do you send them a link so you can work over it with them?
3160718 OH... I use to e-mail it...but it appears that all the cool kids use google.docs, dood... sorry about the confusion.
3160723 sorry about the pestering, anyway If you want I'll go over the chapter with ya and such, just send me the link to Gdocs when and if you're ready.
3160731 Okay, dood... In all honesty...I don't think I have anything to give yea at the moment, dood.
I got three chapters that are out in the open, Cutie Mark Crusader Mini-Series, Old Chrysalis and New Chrysalis, dood. And the only one I didn't get an answer from is the guy doing the CMC chapter... mostly because he told me his computer crashed and his phone can't read large amounts of text very well... I did hear back from the two Chrysalis chapter recently, dood.
3160751 sweet so once the CMC chapter is finished there's going to be a triple upload/update for the chapters?
3160757 Not really, once I get a cleaner Old Chrysalis Chapter and the New Chrysalis chapter back... I'm going to upload the Old Chrysalis onto the Mini-Series with a big ass warning, telling everyone that the page they are on is the old chapter and give them a link to the new chrysalis chapter...and then cut it out a week later, dood.
CMC will be on the Mini-series as well, and I'm roughly 2k words into Fluer de Lis atm, dood.
3160759 kk sounds good.
3159020
Relay. Still wanna see twilight impregnate ponz