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one by one we bite the dust
kick the bucket
begin to rust
give up the ghost, your number's up
we all fall down
...wow...way to set a path to a bad ending.
I can't help but think this song is somewhat relevant right now.
nooooooooooooo sniper whyyyyyyyyy whell i forgive you
And shit be going down son.
As for the end, super creepy...shit...so creepy.
Still reading, but I've noticed one little error:
Despite Nightmare Clockwork supposedly nabbing Rarity, she remains down with everypony else.
1 views.... I WAS THE FIRST TO READ THIS!...But I'm no firstfag...
*raises hands*
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Error corrected. Thank you.
vagineer, heavydile, and CBS....... OH. S***!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I demand a USAF air strike from a B-1b lancer, armed with very big bombs!
Also, this song fits too well for the battle:
Well damn.
An update FINALLY
Um, what?
Either "his link with Rarity" or "her link with him"
Forgot to italicize
Opposite problem here
You might want to italicize that
Wait... isn't it headless?
Dat ending!
May the gods have mercy upon their souls
Wheatley cameo!!!
Also, I think that the Sh*t has just hit a dying star...
Prepare for a Sh*tnova...
Very impressive, mate. One of my favorite stories on this site. I look forward to how you play this.
Oh btw, just a bit of a request. You've seen the finale of the name of the Doctor (my presumption) correct?
What I would find to be completely cool, would be to incorporate the final thing near the end (if you watched it you know) into the grand scheme of the story (on the Doctor's end of course). Why? Because, it is the secret, one that no one knows, one that is buried even deeper than anything. An aspect of the Doctor only one person truly knows about, himself (Clara didn't get it, as she...watch it if you haven't) I'd love to see your take on that, if not oh well.
I look forward to your updates!
Edited: as may reveal doctor spoilers
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Editing mistakes corrected. Also, the pumpkin is its head, really. The joke on the hat you get for beating it the first time is "It had a head after all..." or something to that effect.
WHY.
CLIFFHANGER.
I
HATE
CLIFFHANGERS!
...
Moar,please
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doctor doctor have mercy on me
Summing up everything I think about this right now in 2 words:
Well... Fuck
We need another hero.
Saxton hale maybe?
2605457 Oh. Well, I've never played TF2, so I don't know these things
Just a quote that I think fits my mood after the chapter and in retrospect most of this story.
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2605197 Indeed, I felt so too.
Quick! Call in the M.A.R.V, we need backup!
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Wow... The shit has hit the fan so much it broke...
2605540 No worries.
2605554 Dat tank... I must have!
*Whimper*
How can situation even go THIS FAR beyond FUBAR? It's UNREAL!
BLU: Nightmares Gardener, Juggernaut, Brutality, Doctor and Clockwerk.
RED: Vagineer, CBS, Heavydile and possibly Slenderman.
HOW CAN THIS EVEN GO MORE FUBAR?!
...I better shut up before I give you more ideas...
This chapter gave me chills
Holy mother of whatever is appropriate in this situation.
I feel the need to swear profusely and loudly to properly describe the sheer...
I can't even describe it.
You.
Are.
Fantastic.
^Understatement of the century.
Perhaps the funniest moment in this chapter
The entire battle was hairy, though Listened to BYOB by SOAD and Mad Dance from Tales of Graces as I read along. Nightmare Clockwork is officially my favorite Nightmare
I love how you took the various spawns of gmod and managed to make them actually threatening villains.
Oh and also UPDATE (about time!)
Well, there boned.
So is there a part three to this, because I kind of don't read the 2 parters until they are both there, it makes the experience much more enjoyable to read them together. so I don't want to read this part if there is one part left
OH SHIT SON.
Play this. It will accurately sum up the ending.
If this was my soldier, this guy would mulch a 50 server health Vagi. (I hate them so much my rage fuels my mind into tactical awesomesauce)
Wow, poor Engie. I kinda thought he was gonna build his own working TARDIS out of dirt and moss.
I suppose not having any moss on hoof kinda ruined that plan, though.
and Vagineer? Yuck! I don't pay any attention to the TF2 fan-video things (a bit too... out there for my tastes), but even I can tell that fugly mother is based on those flap-faced monsters from Amnesia. Not sure where Heavydile comes from, though.
Did only the former-Nightmares in Ponyville get relapsed, or are Grave, Dubstep, and Harmonics going to come out of the woodworks too?
Also, I've noticed that all of the Nightmares use variations of the same name: Nightmare Noun (I'm imagining an Alicorn-level Grammar Nazi right now).
Now, theme naming is all well and good, but feel free to mix it up a little. Maybe something along the lines of an Adjective Nightmare or Verbing Nightmare. With Cheerilee, for instance, she could easily have been called Verdant Nightmare.
Feel free not to, of course, but it could help add a bit of variety and avoid mouthfuls like the six-syllable slaughterer Nightmare Brutality.
huh, well, hello minor portal crossover, is Chell anywhere nearby?
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...sending razor-sharp sharps of shit-coated metal flying in every direction but good.
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Welp, that sucks.
Wow, they are beyond fucked now.
2605838 Pyro is one of the most tactics-oriented and tactics-variable classes. Hence, Unicorn.
2605554 That's not big enough. We need bigger. epaworld.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/x-303-prometheus.jpg
I wanted to see something under the To Be Continued line. Something like Immediately.
2605538 BRAVE JUMP! PROPERTY DAMAGE! COMPOUND ELEVATED SKULL FRACTURE!
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THIS CAN ONLY GET WORSE
2606119 One per commander, and GDI has maaany commanders.
CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!?
Eh, I ain't worried. We still have a "Spycora" fusion waiting in the wings... Gem is still behaving like herself so that should help at some point... and there is still that mysterious hooded individual who finished up Gem's programming who can help out the BLUs and Ponyville (maybe even Discord too, but the time for him to come back probably won't be till later.
On the REDs side, who says that there won't be a Saxton Hale tossed into the mix, eh? Coming to turn Heavidile into new shoes, give BCS a spankin', and then "screw" over the Vagineer.
Anyways, another great chapter. Till later , peace out.
great 4 nightmares and 3 freaks the blues,pony's and reds are fuck!
"The wizard grimaced, teleporting away over and over, but the giant Heavybot seemed to be able to follow his every move. "
Yep, those bots do that. Once I jumped into a teleporter right when a sniperbot was getting his sights on my head. I had a bullet in my skull the moment I emerged from the exit. The sniper did a full 180 with his sights still locked on to me.
I doubt any Australium mines would be found outside Australia, but it's a plothole I'm willing to overlook. (Here in America it's just boring ol' non-mutagenic gold.)
If I could critique a bit, I think the story pulls from too many universes at once without much original content. The powers, abilities and such are pretty over-the-top too.
HOWEVER! Everything that is original, especially Gem Sentry, I find awesome. And I still this story is very entertaining so I look forward to each update.
The story has enough flaws that I'm certain it won't be featured on Equestria Daily, but I still love reading it all the same.