Awesome chapter. Luna just doesn't know when to quit, and I love her for it. I'm really enjoying everyone's personality in this fic. Celestia ends up doing the one thing she told herself she probably shouldn't- being a mother hen, Luna keeps being a ham, Twilight is shy, anxious, and now somewhat at risk of a vivisection by the ship's doctor, and Cadance... well, she seems to be getting along fairly well! Strider continues to make me laugh, despite his tragic backstory. Keep up the good work!
Things are looking good, Cap doesn't seem to have some inexplicable attraction to Celestia nor current desire to be her friend. Fingers are crossed it stays this way.
Great chapter. I enjoyed seeing the Princesses reactions to getting flirted at and being dowsed in cold water. It made me laugh. Also, am I the only one who's curious about finding out what happened between Strider and the Minotaur Princess? Something tells me the King would have tried to kill him.
God this awesome "sweet Celestia why have you forsaken us?!” “Don’t you bucking blame me, Twlight!” that was hilarious. Oh man hope you update soon, thank you for writing this.
4696092 hoax... They don't actually raise the sun. It's like the Egyptian Pharaohs sitting down looking at the sunrise and saying they are willing the sun to come up. It's some grand manipulation and obviously it worked
Awk, his crew was killed by Sirens. Bloody terrifying stuff... And he had sex with a Minotaur, that's definitely high-five worthy. Bloody hilarious stuff so far.
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that last line love it
Please tell me you've played guns of Icarus.
This going to be a long time before the Sky Captain can really get along Pony princesses. Which is not going well.
Awesome chapter. Luna just doesn't know when to quit, and I love her for it. I'm really enjoying everyone's personality in this fic. Celestia ends up doing the one thing she told herself she probably shouldn't- being a mother hen, Luna keeps being a ham, Twilight is shy, anxious, and now somewhat at risk of a vivisection by the ship's doctor, and Cadance... well, she seems to be getting along fairly well! Strider continues to make me laugh, despite his tragic backstory. Keep up the good work!
l laughed so hard at the end
That last part is priceless. x'D
Serves 'em fuckin' right.
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This seems fitting, in it's own way.
If this all ends in hugs, friendships, or gods-forbid romance *shudders* I swear I'll end you.
Great
The first part in Canterlot and the last one killed me. Man, this boat is gonna turn into a traveling circus before a fifth of the fic is done.
You know what is missing in this story? Alicorns scrubbing the deck. With their hooves, no cheating with magic.
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Yes, there have been enough of those! No more of that nonsense.
I like this Strider. He's got style.
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You sir, have won all the internets with that one, grats
Things are looking good, Cap doesn't seem to have some inexplicable attraction to Celestia nor current desire to be her friend. Fingers are crossed it stays this way.
Great chapter. I enjoyed seeing the Princesses reactions to getting flirted at and being dowsed in cold water. It made me laugh. Also, am I the only one who's curious about finding out what happened between Strider and the Minotaur Princess? Something tells me the King would have tried to kill him.
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It's a versatile word.
God this awesome "sweet Celestia why have you forsaken us?!”
“Don’t you bucking blame me, Twlight!” that was hilarious. Oh man hope you update soon, thank you for writing this.
This story has my approval.
when did Luna and Celestia change it from day to night?
4696092 Maybe they fell asleep after they raised the sun and lowered the moon.
i hereby declare myself entertained.
This story is going places, loving it!
Just...yes to that.
If she gets anymore screen time, I predict Scalpel will be my favorite character.
Will you be revealing any human history in later chapters?
I really wish now that Captain Strider meets Captain Scarlett from Borderlands 2
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They're just so similar...
4696092 hoax... They don't actually raise the sun. It's like the Egyptian Pharaohs sitting down looking at the sunrise and saying they are willing the sun to come up. It's some grand manipulation and obviously it worked
I'm definitely locking this in as a fav. I only wish I could give it another thumbs up
I feel like Strider should be angrier at them, but he seems to be more in a state of grim acceptance.
Maybe I hold grudges too much.
Either way, great story!
That ending was too fucking funny great chapter, keep up the good work.
Did the captain ever get his coat back?
The first part with Spike taking the helm in Canterlot.
And this whole story, though for some reason this keeps coming into mind.
Awk, his crew was killed by Sirens. Bloody terrifying stuff... And he had sex with a Minotaur, that's definitely high-five worthy. Bloody hilarious stuff so far.
4927271 yolo with the Minotaur part
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