Wow. I wonder what kind of ending we're going to get. Is there really a way to turn back the clock? Will the world end? This is intense. Guess that's the thing about horror: miserable endings are just as likely as happy ones, if not more likely.
Interesting twist with Pinkie Pie being the dangerous one. It's particularly clever because Pinkie's already a weird, quirky character. It isn't immediately apparent that she's being more than her usual eccentric self.
I don't know what it's worse, that the original "The Thing" is pure Lovecraftian horror mixed with high octane paranoia, or putting Lovecraftian horrors in "The Thing" with ponified paranoia. Overkill? Yes. I like it? Oh boy if I like it.
Brilliant. The portrayal of Dash in this chapter was amazing. Every scene with her showcased a mounting paranoia and growing disillusionment. And that stubborn "I can win this" attitude was perfect. And her ending? That has to be the most chilling accounting of drowning I have ever read.
I literally had shivers when Fluttershy stared down the big bad. I wasn't expecting that, and it was brilliant.
And more bodies showed up, which is good, cause we're all out.
Who here tried reading this with the original The Thing theme song? I DID. Amazing work, so many questions, so many mysteries. I loved the suspenseful atmosphere the story gives. You sir made a (high) brony have the most amazing lecture, here.
This history that Pinkie is telling is fascinating. This is all fascinating, and completely entrancing!
FFFFFF DID RAINBOW DASH JUST KILL APPLE BLOOM D:
Ohai Applejack. :B
...And Rainbow drowns under the ice? D: After all that? ._. That's not a good prize. Where's the frickin' tragedy tag, man?
"and her eyebrows rising": rose
Okay, I'm okay with how you killed Fluttershy off. That was pretty epic, not to mention heroic. But now Twilight gets to be all alone, assuming she makes it out even. D: What the fuck?
God dammit, Hawks, god dammit! D: Where the hell have you been?
Well, this has been a real crapsack of an adventure. ;_; I guess there's one more left?
This has to be the single most amazing, touching and bone-chilling stories that i've EVER READ on this website, it even goes as far as to rank up there on my favourite stories. Adding Lovecraftian horror to an already amazing horror theme such as; "The Thing" was absolutely genius. Great job man! I can't wait to see the next chapter (possibly an ending?) and more from you. Have all of my internets, Infinite internets coming your way!
It was probably the fact that I would have no more to read after reading this chapter that kept me from it. Well, shame on me. Dash's final sequence was amazing to read, and Twilight's equally so. I can hardly wait to see how this ends.
Just epic. Rainbow dash dies by the elements of nature. I was hoping twilight and flutter shy would find apple loom corpse to see if she was a monster. but great chapter man 10/10
Another excellent chapter. It seems Fluttershy was able to stop the Lovecraftian Eldritch Abomantions from coming forth, but we can't be too sure. Also, I find it amusing that most everyone reading this thinks it's just a crossover with The Thing and some Lovecraft elements, instead of reading the description and knowing that all the other stuff comes from Prince of Darkness and In the Mouth of Madness.
Wow. I wonder what kind of ending we're going to get. Is there really a way to turn back the clock? Will the world end? This is intense. Guess that's the thing about horror: miserable endings are just as likely as happy ones, if not more likely.
Interesting twist with Pinkie Pie being the dangerous one. It's particularly clever because Pinkie's already a weird, quirky character. It isn't immediately apparent that she's being more than her usual eccentric self.
Looking forward to more.
Holly crap that's epic, but i still have a ton of unanswered questions.
I don't know what it's worse, that the original "The Thing" is pure Lovecraftian horror mixed with high octane paranoia, or putting Lovecraftian horrors in "The Thing" with ponified paranoia.
Overkill? Yes. I like it? Oh boy if I like it.
Suspense is killing me.
Story made me a little bit on the sick side litterally
Brilliant. The portrayal of Dash in this chapter was amazing. Every scene with her showcased a mounting paranoia and growing disillusionment. And that stubborn "I can win this" attitude was perfect. And her ending? That has to be the most chilling accounting of drowning I have ever read.
I literally had shivers when Fluttershy stared down the big bad. I wasn't expecting that, and it was brilliant.
And more bodies showed up, which is good, cause we're all out.
Keep up the excellent work as you wind this down.
Who here tried reading this with the original The Thing theme song? I DID.
Amazing work, so many questions, so many mysteries. I loved the suspenseful atmosphere the story gives.
You sir made a (high) brony have the most amazing lecture, here.
Shouldn't this be rated grimdark? Seems a fair shade darker than just "dark" to me.
Why is Pinkie crying tears of blood? D:
I think you mean "tinkling", not "tinkering".
This history that Pinkie is telling is fascinating. This is all fascinating, and completely entrancing!
FFFFFF DID RAINBOW DASH JUST KILL APPLE BLOOM D:
Ohai Applejack. :B
...And Rainbow drowns under the ice? D: After all that? ._. That's not a good prize. Where's the frickin' tragedy tag, man?
"and her eyebrows rising": rose
Okay, I'm okay with how you killed Fluttershy off. That was pretty epic, not to mention heroic. But now Twilight gets to be all alone, assuming she makes it out even. D: What the fuck?
God dammit, Hawks, god dammit! D: Where the hell have you been?
Well, this has been a real crapsack of an adventure. ;_; I guess there's one more left?
This has to be the single most amazing, touching and bone-chilling stories that i've EVER READ on this website, it even goes as far as to rank up there on my favourite stories. Adding Lovecraftian horror to an already amazing horror theme such as; "The Thing" was absolutely genius. Great job man! I can't wait to see the next chapter (possibly an ending?) and more from you. Have all of my internets, Infinite internets coming your way!
It was probably the fact that I would have no more to read after reading this chapter that kept me from it. Well, shame on me. Dash's final sequence was amazing to read, and Twilight's equally so. I can hardly wait to see how this ends.
I have never watched any of the movies, But I got to say that this is REALLY REALLY GOOD!
Just epic. Rainbow dash dies by the elements of nature. I was hoping twilight and flutter shy would find apple loom corpse to see if she was a monster. but great chapter man 10/10
Huh, Dash's death actually made me feel really sad. Considering most sadfics don't make me sad, that's saying something.
I totally called it! Pinkie is something strange!
Another excellent chapter. It seems Fluttershy was able to stop the Lovecraftian Eldritch Abomantions from coming forth, but we can't be too sure. Also, I find it amusing that most everyone reading this thinks it's just a crossover with The Thing and some Lovecraft elements, instead of reading the description and knowing that all the other stuff comes from Prince of Darkness and In the Mouth of Madness.
Holy crap.
Wow crap crap hit the fan fast