5063147 I think there is a distinct lack of nightmare fuel in this chapter. Hence why you are disappointed with it. It was more actiony than anything else.
5065916 eh, wolfenstein's weaponry wasn't that great, at least in terms of inventiveness. Though I liked the laserkraftwerk. I'm aiming for stuff you'd seen in Borderlands or something made by Insomniac Games
5066867 I believe I did notice that. Also that gun used in the forth one is basically an upgraded verion of the Atomizer. Now we just need something like the Cyrogun, the Auger, the HE .44 Magnum with its exploding bullets, and the Wildfire.
5066945 I wanted to put in the WIldfire, but Redskin went for that nuke launcher from fallout instead. So that was out. Why would I need an HE.44? Kraber's revolver is already like one but bigger.
That was definitely an interesting chapter and those quotes though the final quote about the newfoals was exactly the way I imagined them and it still gave me a bit of hope about my idea concerning them during an event like that.
You know, something popped up in my head over the week concerning Cheerilee. Something to do with her runic enhancements and how Scribe commented on Marcus's own runes, allowing for something very special. Simply put, I predict that at least one pony will find themselves getting an upgrade at the worst of times possible. As in I am hoping there shall be two immortals to join the ranks.
I would say who they are, but I fear that might be spoiling things.
Whatever happened to the Thai carrier Chakri Naruebet, the Indian carriers, and the Russian aircraft carrier (or aircraft carrying missile cruiser, according to Russia) Admiral Kuznetsov?
5067199 Still awesome. I was more thinking about the feature of that gun from the first game, which was that every bullet was also a remote detonated bomb.
5066496 What about adding some magical elements on vehicles and tanks and maybe something that give humans the ability to fly like that flying machine that The Falcon have from the movie Captain America: Winter Soldier:
5076082 In the first draft of this story Kraber had something like the maneuvering gear from Titanfall, but I consider this an improvement even without it.
Comment posted by Doctor Fluffy deleted Sep 30th, 2014
I hope my part was not too spoilery
5062396 I... I hope so.
Besides, I've taken great care not to reveal the potion trials. Long as we don't reveal what happened there, we'll be golden
5062396 Don't worry
5062540 She's a main character in Last Train.
Trust me, sooner or later, you'll find out why she was ponified while retaining her mind.
It seem shit is going down.....beautifully and horribly
Pros
Superb grammer
Proper use of punctuation
Cons
The "Nightmare Fuel" moments of the story, their not bad, but some of them border on the lines of absurdity
5063147 I think there is a distinct lack of nightmare fuel in this chapter. Hence why you are disappointed with it. It was more actiony than anything else.
5063320 honestly, i'm disappointed in myself for that.
5062768 It was totally intentional.
5063106 Don't worry. I'm working on being less repetitive on that literally right as we speak. No, seriously.
5062540
5062546 and it will be funny as hell. Hence why Kraber found it hilarious.
I'm practically giving it to you on the answer....
You know, with so many weapons being made, including enhanced swords I am surprised that shifting weapons like from RWBY aren't being made yet.
5064515 Oh, it was tempting. However, I'm more of the 'huge, blomkamp-esque BFG' kind of weapons designer.
Now we get to see shit hit the fan for the Tyrant. And it will be glorious.
Two major typos that stood out:
1.) Ship names, novel titles and movie titles are not italicized when they should be.
2.)
- should be Navy SEALs as SEAL is an acronym.
5065733 I'll get right on that.
5064726 5064054 5064515
If you guys need for more ideas for weapons here:
And I'm so looking forward to seeing the final battle on Earth I hope the battles will be epic like these videos.:
5065916 eh, wolfenstein's weaponry wasn't that great, at least in terms of inventiveness. Though I liked the laserkraftwerk. I'm aiming for stuff you'd seen in Borderlands or something made by Insomniac Games
5065916
Oh, don't worry about weapons...
We got weapons covered.
5064726
Ah. Well no real loss. Plus who know, if this story's universe continues after the war is over that could still happen.
5065926
You should definitely take a look at some of the weapons from the Resistance series.
5066647 Oh, I totally did.
One weapon in chapter 5 appears as an homage to the Bullseye from that series
5066867
I believe I did notice that.
Also that gun used in the forth one is basically an upgraded verion of the Atomizer.
Now we just need something like the Cyrogun, the Auger, the HE .44 Magnum with its exploding bullets, and the Wildfire.
5066945 I wanted to put in the WIldfire, but Redskin went for that nuke launcher from fallout instead. So that was out.
Why would I need an HE.44? Kraber's revolver is already like one but bigger.
That was definitely an interesting chapter and those quotes though the final quote about the newfoals was exactly the way I imagined them and it still gave me a bit of hope about my idea concerning them during an event like that.
You know, something popped up in my head over the week concerning Cheerilee.
Something to do with her runic enhancements and how Scribe commented on Marcus's own runes, allowing for something very special.
Simply put, I predict that at least one pony will find themselves getting an upgrade at the worst of times possible. As in I am hoping there shall be two immortals to join the ranks.
I would say who they are, but I fear that might be spoiling things.
Got a bunch of questions:
When was the Stampede Fleet established?
Whatever happened to the Thai carrier Chakri Naruebet, the Indian carriers, and the Russian aircraft carrier (or aircraft carrying missile cruiser, according to Russia) Admiral Kuznetsov?
5067199
Still awesome.
I was more thinking about the feature of that gun from the first game, which was that every bullet was also a remote detonated bomb.
5067685 it was back in Case Files
5066496
What about adding some magical elements on vehicles and tanks and maybe something that give humans the ability to fly like that flying machine that The Falcon have from the movie Captain America: Winter Soldier:
5076082 In the first draft of this story Kraber had something like the maneuvering gear from Titanfall, but I consider this an improvement even without it.
5068105 ...Maybe that was the 13mm revolver Kraber had earlier? Okay screw it now that's can(n)on. Maybe.
5077888 Actually that was totally unintentional
But Beyond wants a group going-think imma make a blog post about it, write some stuff up today.
5678487 I think I've read that one too.