Equestria a place where ponies rule with absolute dominance, but what of the others? The Gryphons, the diamond dogs, the changelings, the minotaurs? Harmony has ruled for far too long, now the true power of Chaos is unleashed in the form of one man.
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I have the first comment, and I say I love this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
4978234 Congrats on being the first commentor on chapter fifteen and I am happy to hear that you have enjoyed it.
Once again, sweet chapter, loved the heist pulled as well as the lead up to the next job. Keep goin and stay golden^^
4978388 I thought I had finished all the chapters so I was leavening and saw that a new chapter was out! By the I'm loving this story, I've favorited, I'm a fan and I'm hocked!
Wait, also I just joined your shadow army!
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You nerfed the Magic Cancelation most humans have...
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You're my hero.
4978443 Welcome to the shadow army. I am happy to see the number of the army grow and I am happy to hear and see that you joined up and that you like the story.
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4978416 It's good to read that the story is still well liked by people who have been following it for quite a while already. Thanks for the continued support!
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I was starting to wonder when someone was going to say that, so I guess I now know.
I thought there were so many stories with humans being immune for magic, that I just needed to create a story where the human could keep the immunity, but in exchange for something. I honestly believe not many people are going to say with this deal the immunity was too cheap.
I am glad you like the story and I hope I will not dissapoint in the future.
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... Are those cats masterbating in a box together?
... Okay.
4978805 You are right with the human abs magic stuff.
4978837 They ain't my cats, so they can do what they like.
I didn't plan it at least.
All I could think of by the end of this chapter was this:
GO PIKACHU!
when are we gonna get a view change to the princesses?
4980572 Ah yes no worries there will be plenty of their views and of others like Shining Armor and other oc ponies and other creatures in the future as well. Expect the first of those types of things to happen when Karl is active in Ironhoof both because he did some things (prison break) and just about the unrest there in general.
That is still going to be quite a few chapters minimum 4-5 chapters, but I hope that this at least temporarily answers your question. If it's any consolation once it starts stuff is going to be big!
4979703 It looks like my story with a chaotic plot has attracted a chaotic being. I like it! Welcome to the club Sheogorath!
4981400 since you already stated that karl wins in this fic, i hope you see it through
most authors tend to lets this drag on then never finish it
4981551 I hope so as well, but I am afraid only time will tell. There's no point in making promises of which you don't know if you can keep them or not.
Ah yes putting stories in groups like Humans are superior or Ponies are superior do tend to be spoilers, of course the sweetness of victory and what type of victory (decisive, pyrrhic), the goals that are achieved and which are not achieved remain to be seen.
4981439 But of course! Chaos attracts madness and vice versa! Why do you think I get along so well with Discord and Loki for?
You get a like!
4981744 Point taken.
4983751 Thank you and all the others that have liked and or supported the story so far!
4986231 Wonderful. Have some gouda cheese then!
4986238 A most excelent suggestion. I shall take it.
4986352 wonderful!
A comment.
4995444 A reply
4995552 A pun
My foreshadowing sense are tingling. And so is my soup.
4997021 a facepalm.