Equestria a place where ponies rule with absolute dominance, but what of the others? The Gryphons, the diamond dogs, the changelings, the minotaurs? Harmony has ruled for far too long, now the true power of Chaos is unleashed in the form of one man.
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4731709 Thank you for the constructive critiscm and I am glad that overall you gave the fic a 7/10 so far. If you wouldn't mind I would like to defend a few of my reasons.
The Princesses had a special spell active to scan for humans in Equestria, this is partially because of the humans that died, of course not because of them because they died instantly, but I will spoil a small part not all humans died some used magic to transform into somethhing that made them resistant. These humans were a long time ago big threats to Equestria before being defeated, so there is a reason why that spell was kept active as she feared they might escape like Discord. Of course you didn't know this because I never told that in the story for the time being. This is more for a lot later in the story.
I can understand it with the mutant thing, but mutating on a long term time would make travel impossible because of the discomfort not to mention that mutations as severe as his could take generations under normal laws to complete.That's my reasoning for his decently quick mutation.
I understand that it might look like the guys became friends quite rapidly, but do note that both need each other at that period in time. Karl needed help finding shelter and Locust needed medical attention, in those situations people can turn friendly quite rapidly towards each other and definitely considering they have the same enemies.
Thank you for the kind words! Because of the fact that chapter twelve is already written and thirteen as good as done those chapters will not possess any soldier references. However I will try to put in the authors note of the next chapter from when you can expect to see a few of references (no, I won't tell where, just from which point you can start searching).
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This fic in a nutshell.
4735508 Yep, that pretty much sums up 95% of the entire story. Well done sir!
Even though this chapter was somewhat rushed, I am still going to be hooked to it mainly because of Karl being the monster while Celestia and Luna are the true monsters in this fan fiction.
4735692 Yep, that pretty much sums it up.This situation is kind of similiar to Macbeth. Karl being the antagonist (Macduff) who is morally seen in the right against the tyranny of Celesita&Luna (Macbeth).
4735816 True but watching him show the fury of Humanity without the need for an army or advanced weaponry is just...I can't even describe it
4735838 Yes, I wanted to make a story in which the human doesn't rely on guns to survive, however there is a terrible lack of these stories. Either the human has a gun or he gets captured almost immediately. I wanted to make sure to show that humans greatest weapons aren't super advanced guns, it's their own brain.
In a head on fight an unarmed human wouldn't stand a chance against a unicorn because of the basic telekinesis that unicorns know, but who cares we wouldn't we stand a chance against by example a bear either. How do we kill a bear? We use spears and traps when the guns are missing or before they were created. With sentient opponents we outsmart them, attack from the back, or even better make someone else do the job for us.
I find it such a terrible shame that most stories base the power of humanity upon their guns whilst in reality their minds can cause much more damage than a hundred guns ever could if well used.
Great chapter![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
4738182 Your kind words are much appreciated!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
And your follow is also much appreciated!
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You would think that, but rage is one hell of an anesthetic.
truth my friend truth. Rage has been man key to life for many years.
4740148 How long would a medieval army such as France during the beginning of the Hundred Years War take to conquer Equestria? Assuming an assassin manages to kill the diarchs, Mane Six and Discord? (I assume they can be killed as the show implies they aren't unkillable)