MOOOAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If thats okay with you

4480499 I think I know what happened when you converted. I think you forgot the point between 15 and 748 because otherwise you would get 40 cm. Because my computer screen is I believe 27 inches. When I first entered it, I forgot the comma as well and then I got what you got.
Try putting it in here for some reason it needs to be a point when put in here:
http://www.convertunits.com/from/cm/to/inches

Btw. Nice profile picture you got there. I like gryphons. They are my favorite race in MLP FIM.

4480551 Fine with me oh and welcome to the club I would say. May I also ask how you found this story? I try to figure out a way to reach more people so I am curious as to how everybody or everypony found the story.

Lay siege to hoovetown
And make him build trebuchet's
And maybe a canon prototype

Like how your story use roman military tactics to over power the Equestrian soldier lead by Courageous Call. By using slingshot crews to take down there air support, like roman us them to attack towns with great wall around them by firing oil full pot on fire to burn out there enemy from bases and do heavy damage to them. Also how the Diamond dog soldiers circle Karl with there spear and I think shields. Because I think roman military tactics work good against Equestrian England medieval style tactics. Now what is Karl going to do about Hoovetown? will he find the leak in the Diamond dog perk that give tip to the town about there raids. can what to read about it.
P.S put a link on youtube about your story on a next video and post it here ok.

4480692 Good idea for the trebuchets, I had not thought about those yet, although I find it a little too early for cannons. Thanks for the suggestions if you or anyone else have anymore please tell me. I don't guarantee using them, but you know if we all put our brains together we have a bigger chance of getting a good one of which me "the writer" hasn't thought of yet like you just demonstrated with the trebuchets.

4480760 I am happy you liked the tactics used in the battle. I personally believe that Roman tactics are superior to mediëval tactics, although I am going to admit that I don't know much about mediëval tactics. I am extremely happy that you and some others seem to be trilled for the next chapter.

Thank you for the advice for a youtube vid I will try to create one well perhaps multyple depending on how much I like doing it.

Btw. Thanks for the follow! Welcome to the shadow army!

viva la revolution

Command and Counqer motherfuckers !,

The walls Annotatehave been breached! Advaaaaaaance!
We came in the name of peace and brotherhood, you wanted us bound in slavery, poisoned our water, changed our names...
Burn their homes, take their jewels, skin them alive!
Hold on, hold on, hold on... Rape their women !
No one will know these people ever existed, and all that will be left is what we build upon their ruins...

I found this story when it was new so i subscribed to it i just havent commented yet this was my first comment on the story

Just keep doing what your doing i love it so far.

Divide and counqer

I'm not sure if this has already been addressed, but are you open to working with an editor?

Also, VIVA LA REVOLUCIÓN

4485815 Yes, I am searching for an editor do you by coincidence have interest? If so feel free to PM me.

Not bad, but you have a bad habit of using death in place of dead or dieing a few times, also you've missed use some words here and there. I suggest looking over chapter 6 and I believe chapter 2 for some of these, their minor, but they are still there.
Also I will give kudos to you using Kempf (German for Struggle) as Karl's last name.

all in all, its not bad, I hope to see some more improvement and chapters as your story continues.

4491774 Thank you for the information, I will certainly try to fix these mistakes (perhaps in the weekend, my exams are getting closer so my time is a bit more limited). Thank you for telling me in which chapters the mistakes are located! People often forget that and it's quite annoying to find it in a story on your own.

I admit that I indeed use death instead of dead. I did not really know when to use one and when to use the other, but I believe I figured it out.

Thanks for the kudos! Here have a in return.

You know what they say. "With practice we learn." with that said. Thank you for your comment and for the support you have given me, I will be sure to get another chapter up as quick as possible.

You have done humans and all impoverished creatures of equestria PROUD!

If it were possible I would give you vladof rifle. Like they say vladof...Vladof…VLADOF!!!

4504628 Wonderful!!! Someone else who sees in the importance of a good vladof! It's not a revolution without a vladof.

Oh well if revolution is needed, Vladof will come to us.

Karl yelled as he and the dogs formed a circle, so that wherever the pegasi tried to attack from they were always met with a spear point.

we know what circles are, don't over explain things. you might as well have written "and then Karl drank out of the cup that he was drinking out of because he wanted to drink the liquid that was in the cup he was drinking." you really need an editor, you have so many grammar errors. story's good though.

I LOVE THIS THING!!!

I love the pre-battle stats and the aftermath stats. It makes me think of what total war could do. Also, could you have Karl follow the art of war? Roman tactics are fantastic and all, but Suz Tzu perfected the art of war.

Viva La Revolution!

Really liked the pre and post-battle analysis in this section!
Great job all around, couple grammar issues but nothing more.

Pls moar TSOZ!

4506737 You must read the articles in Wikipedia a lot. Great job organizing the statistics.

This is a good story and so far I love it.

“We will learn those muts to not mess with Equestria!”

Man, whoever said that has terrible grammer. Stupid ponies can't even English right.

You do know that there's no need to put extra exclamation marks, right? Because, if I'm yelling something like "donuts!" would it sound louder if I yell "donuts!!"? I don't really think so, but that's just my opinion.