6674390 It is indeed. 6674440 I've seen her characterized as Milano for some reason [despite it not really being a lore friendly name]. I went with 'Molly Coddle' in the first chapter, presuming that cutie mark of a heart and bottle represents a special talent of nurturing.
I've been loving this story since the beginning. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the interaction that Dee is having with the school and everyone there, now the whole mom thing comes into play.
For anyone who enjoys reading or just storytelling knows that chapters that like this that are slow or seem dull are not only important but required. A break from the action or main plot helps keep the rest of the story interesting by providing a pause for the characters. Can you imagine watching Star Wars or 2012 or even Pearl Harbor and not having any slow downs of the action? Just Lazer and exploding earth and bombs going off the whole movie? You would get bored and move on to something else. While chapters like this status one are lame, they provide a nessecary break. To that end I did enjoy it however I do find miss Guiding Role to be a bit more gruff then I expected. Like it was more her problem then Dee Pad.
6676510 I think it was more that she wanted Dee to know her actions has consequences, both for herself and for those involved. I agree with her line of reasoning, that it would be very bad if the school faculty don't seem trustworthy or approachable.
S'been a while since I actually sat down and read a fic, and I am glad I did. Reading the original fic, then all of this stories chapters has been a joy. It hits home with some more than too real issues and highlights a lot of problems those that are transitioning have pretty well, including those that are quite severe. At least 1 in 3 trans* people are abused in their transition and it's nice to see that you're not just glossing over how bad of an experience that can be for someone. Overall, this is a very good fic; story, grammar and emotionally wise, I look forward to reading more of it.
From her perch at a free computer in the guidance office, Dee stared down at the battlefield with glee as her dreadnought linked up with her force commander, while her tactical and scout marine squads joined forces with some friendly AI units. The skirmish was far from over, but things were definitely going in her favor. Leaning back, she decided that the game was a nice change of pace, and silently thanked whoever had installed it on the system.
I like this characterisation.:3
Blood pegasi? is this a reference to the blood ravens in Dawn of war?
I'm looking forward to seeing how Dee's mother (Elaina, I think she's been called by some) reacts when she finds out that her son is now her daughter.
AH HELLO TINY CITIZEN HAVE YOU PRAISED THE EMPEROR TODAY?
6674390 It is indeed.
6674440 I've seen her characterized as Milano for some reason [despite it not really being a lore friendly name]. I went with 'Molly Coddle' in the first chapter, presuming that cutie mark of a heart and bottle represents a special talent of nurturing.
I've been loving this story since the beginning. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the interaction that Dee is having with the school and everyone there, now the whole mom thing comes into play.
It's sad that our chapter is so short, but it works well. Not everything needs be charged with high sexual content or drama!!
Also, what is this about striped panties???
6674888 Milano was the very first widely adopted name for her; something about her colour scheme being similar to a Milano cookie.
Either way, only Jananimations knows what her true name is.
Regardless, more please.
For anyone who enjoys reading or just storytelling knows that chapters that like this that are slow or seem dull are not only important but required. A break from the action or main plot helps keep the rest of the story interesting by providing a pause for the characters. Can you imagine watching Star Wars or 2012 or even Pearl Harbor and not having any slow downs of the action? Just Lazer and exploding earth and bombs going off the whole movie? You would get bored and move on to something else.
While chapters like this status one are lame, they provide a nessecary break. To that end I did enjoy it however I do find miss Guiding Role to be a bit more gruff then I expected. Like it was more her problem then Dee Pad.
Nice chapter seven.
6676510
I think it was more that she wanted Dee to know her actions has consequences, both for herself and for those involved. I agree with her line of reasoning, that it would be very bad if the school faculty don't seem trustworthy or approachable.
S'been a while since I actually sat down and read a fic, and I am glad I did. Reading the original fic, then all of this stories chapters has been a joy. It hits home with some more than too real issues and highlights a lot of problems those that are transitioning have pretty well, including those that are quite severe. At least 1 in 3 trans* people are abused in their transition and it's nice to see that you're not just glossing over how bad of an experience that can be for someone. Overall, this is a very good fic; story, grammar and emotionally wise, I look forward to reading more of it.
You could have done "Chapter 9: Vocations" :P
HOLD THE PRESS! ! There is only going to be one more chapter? I don't know how to feel about that. . . I hope she gets a happily ever after.
i cant wait for the next chapter! i love this story so much.
i get on to check tracking stories, then i misread the tracking thought this one had a up date... now im sad v.v
40K, by any chance?
Yeah. Was on a Dawn of War II kick when I wrote that.