It has begun.💀 Whatever (or WHOever) has possessed Fluttershy seems hellbent on turning the other elements as well. YIPES! Hope to see a new chapter soon. Hopefully one in time for Halloween. Take your time, though.
OMG, I can't believe Fluttershy turned Rarity into a monster. I hope Twilight and the other Element Bearers will find a way to stop those bloodthirsty fiends before its too late.
I was going to give this story a shot.... and then you fucking murdered children and decided to make the Vampire feel more like a fucking zombie then a real vampire not to mention you have Twilight not at all realistically in denial. So my good sir? I'm not giving this story a like, fav, or dislike. That would mean I felt something was here.... there isn't. It's just folks dying for shock value. You can try and justify it all you want but it's just shock value and not even the good kind.
Hey Rated Ponystar, I'm a new deviant art member that just joined Fimfiction last week and I just want to say...your story is amazing! I've seen many other fimfiction stories with Flutterbat and out of all of them...this one is the best one YET! There is literally nothing about it that I don't like, I found myself reading it over and over and OVER again from the very beginning, getting chills everytime I do! The artwork only makes it better, though I can undertand why you took at least one of them out, that doesnt make the story any less more epic or the artwork any less more breathtakngly beautiful...you sir, are an expert writer, and I can't wait to see where this story goes. I could say all the positive words in the entire english dictionary, and none of them can even come close to expressing my amazemnt for this story...none. Still, stupendous work my friend...stupendous work to both you and JamesCrock!
One Question though; about that little beautiful and intimatte scene with Rarity and Fluttershy...wanna tell us something about that? Do you ship them?
Comment posted by Super Ponyman deleted May 17th, 2018
And thus, the army grows! Army of the Undead!!
WELP.
That was almost worse what happened to Spike this chapter.
Twilight is gonna feel mighty STUPID when they finally figure things out.
Well two down four to go. I think pinkie is going to be next.
It has begun
May Faust have mercy on Twilight and every pony else.
Fluttershy's going way to serious these times. She has to be stopped right now!
oh boi this is gun be fun
It has begun.💀
Whatever (or WHOever) has possessed Fluttershy seems hellbent on turning the other elements as well. YIPES!
Hope to see a new chapter soon. Hopefully one in time for Halloween. Take your time, though.
OMG, I can't believe Fluttershy turned Rarity into a monster. I hope Twilight and the other Element Bearers will find a way to stop those bloodthirsty fiends before its too late.
Body count: 3 ponies and 5 children...All innocent
THAT'S IT! WHERE'S MY SWORD I'M GOING CURSADING! DEUS VULT!
I was going to give this story a shot.... and then you fucking murdered children and decided to make the Vampire feel more like a fucking zombie then a real vampire not to mention you have Twilight not at all realistically in denial. So my good sir? I'm not giving this story a like, fav, or dislike. That would mean I felt something was here.... there isn't. It's just folks dying for shock value. You can try and justify it all you want but it's just shock value and not even the good kind.
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She sure is!
Hey Rated Ponystar, I'm a new deviant art member that just joined Fimfiction last week and I just want to say...your story is amazing! I've seen many other fimfiction stories with Flutterbat and out of all of them...this one is the best one YET! There is literally nothing about it that I don't like, I found myself reading it over and over and OVER again from the very beginning, getting chills everytime I do! The artwork only makes it better, though I can undertand why you took at least one of them out, that doesnt make the story any less more epic or the artwork any less more breathtakngly beautiful...you sir, are an expert writer, and I can't wait to see where this story goes. I could say all the positive words in the entire english dictionary, and none of them can even come close to expressing my amazemnt for this story...none. Still, stupendous work my friend...stupendous work to both you and JamesCrock!
One Question though; about that little beautiful and intimatte scene with Rarity and Fluttershy...wanna tell us something about that? Do you ship them?
About damn time you got your head out of your ass and started connecting the fucking dots, Twilight!
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Totally...I was wondering when she was finally going to start considering it.
Another missing image.
Oh god... not Nurse Redheart. Why?!