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AHM A FAHRIN MAH LA- What? *listens to minion whisper in ear* Oh. I'm not supposed to lazerface you for another 6 weeks. My apologies. *leaves*
Good story. So Lyra is his descendent. Didn't see that coming. How will everpony take this revealation.
more please
Hmm... fighting scene could have been improved upon a bit more. Add in a few blows being exchanged, maybe have the bow double as a dagger of sorts? Much more can be done with this fight if given time and patience.