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Ho boy, this shit again.
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You did, when you put it on the internet. People aren't just going to jerk you off because you want them to; you have to put some effort into this shit. Like it or not, you need to actually do something original.
4167716 You're concern is noted, and thank you but the fact that you are just slinging hate around is not appreciated and I would appreciate you removing yourself from the comments as if you have nothing constructive to say as you have admitted to not reading the story you are offering nothing but, being a jerk so please locate yourself elsewhere.
4167980 I swear to the maker if you start slinging insults without even reading the story I will personally remove your comments.
4167986 Oh yes I know that much but, you know what? By admitting he had not read the story he has given up all right to be any kind of critic as he has stated that he has no concern with seeing the story's content and already passing judgement via his actions.
4167992 It's hard not to go "oh boy this shit again" when you've seen this story 80 times already and not one instance has been worth the time it took to read. This is a public archive and people have a right to express themselves, and that includes extremely negative reactions.
4167998 I knew it was going to be bad before I read it, and reading it just confirmed my assumption. The whole villain cosplay schtick is stale as hell, so excuse all of us who gag when it's forced down our throats yet again. And to combine it with pretty much every anthro cliche ever just makes it that much more unpleasant.
4168011 True but, it also as a site dedicated to writing deserves at least the common curtosy of having judgement withheld until the story in question is written has been seen. Does nobody remember how Twilight was basically bitchslapped with that lesson in the show we're all such big fans of because she jumped to conclusions?
4168166 What do you mean one of those stories? I'd love to hear your opinion on where you think it's going.
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That sums up how I expect this fic to go.
4168191 So... you assume it's going to be a trainwreck or at the very least like watching a train crash in slow motion?
4168197 The first one.
4168213 Well... I'm not gonna lie it's gonna look like it till I find an editor but, honestly I've been told I can work some major magic on a story when I put my mind to it.
4168219 "Show, don't tell"
4168219 Well, someone's going to hell for lying, then.
Well this is awful.
How is this so disliked?
It's hilarious.
4170372 Ah see, the problem is that... I know about the sentence structure and honestly it's always been my weakness as a writer. Like... always, I've never been good with periods, commas, and semicolons as to my dyslexia infused eyes the sentences read fine.
Look I know the villain cosplay story has been done before and i understand people on this site aren't going to like it good sir. I however find your story unique and refreshing because it is your take on it, your ideas, and your words. So from me to you and the LoHAV i applaud you all for great works and your innovated ideas keep up the good work!
4168014 I'm just gonna say now. I love the premise, but please please PLEASE get yourself an editor. It just seems to me that you aren't putting much effort into proofreading this before you upload it.
Camlio, just dont pay the haters any mind. If they are unable to come up with criticism as to how this story can be improved, then you should just ignore them. No point wasting your time with pointless banter. Anyway, im liking this story so far. The chapters can be a bit longer though. Im going to tell you some advice that a fellow writer gave me, and is why my writing has improved far beyond how I used to write.
"In any story, it is about the journey, and what happened along the way. Not the destination."
I like where this story is going, but it has a lot of run-on sentences. You should probably get an editor.
ROTATE THAT OWL
I BET 50000 BETS THAT IT'S FLUTTERSHY