Sex and a slight amount of plot. I know it is supposed to be shameless sex, but I like the portrayal of a prudish Cadance. So many other stories have her as a wild, sexual deviant.
Honestly, I feel kinda bad for Shining. Sure, the two love each other, but... well, yeah. Though, you can't force that kind of thing on others, so fantasies simply remain fantasies, even in the openness of love.
Sad fact of life... but, love isn't all about sex.
I know you wrote just clop. But damn, that description of sex as physically pleasurable while spiritually unsatisfying, both simultaneously... wow. And that line about the well-behaved dog... ouch.
4129179 a pony has four legs. Arms are usually only on bipedal creatures or creatures with non digitigrade legs. Horses have digitigrade legs, and therefore, have four legs, thus, the legs at the front are forelegs.
This full on sounds like the story called “A drug” but this pretty much sums this up of lustful desire turned to regret yet either way I still love this you did a nice job.😁😁😁
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Ponies don't have forelegs.
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That is not universially agreed
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And besides, I already overused 'hooves' in that section. I'm sure as hell not going to say 'arms', so what else would you have me do?
i realy look forward to this!
4129190 Replace their front limbs with tentacles.
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Good. Because each chapter is better than the one before!
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I'll save that for my next clopfic.
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*Squee*
Outside of disliking the 'foreleg' thing, it was a nice chapter, I gotta say.
Sex and a slight amount of plot. I know it is supposed to be shameless sex, but I like the portrayal of a prudish Cadance. So many other stories have her as a wild, sexual deviant.
Honestly, I feel kinda bad for Shining. Sure, the two love each other, but... well, yeah. Though, you can't force that kind of thing on others, so fantasies simply remain fantasies, even in the openness of love.
Sad fact of life... but, love isn't all about sex.
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Seems Chrysalis is gonna make up for this in bloody spades. And I think Shining'll be pretty hungry for it.
Prudish Cadance is prudish.
Consensual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation
My body is ready.
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Good.
Because this is the worst of the three.
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I know, right?
I like the way I was able to build a little bit of plot and relationship issues into a simple clopfic.
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I see my message is coming across clearly.
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Indeed.
She's the goddess of love, not the goddess of sex.
The goddess of sex comes in chapters 2 & 3!
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Good, because this is where it gets more interesting!
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Hm.
I know you wrote just clop. But damn, that description of sex as physically pleasurable while spiritually unsatisfying, both simultaneously... wow. And that line about the well-behaved dog... ouch.
4129179 a pony has four legs. Arms are usually only on bipedal creatures or creatures with non digitigrade legs. Horses have digitigrade legs, and therefore, have four legs, thus, the legs at the front are forelegs.
Duuuuude... first sentence! How could you do this to me?!
If she's on top, wouldn't they still be face to face? Or at least, they could be.
This full on sounds like the story called “A drug” but this pretty much sums this up of lustful desire turned to regret yet either way I still love this you did a nice job.😁😁😁
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Glad you like it! ^.^ I do think this is one of my better fics.
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Can you please resend the image? It has passed so many years that it disappeared.
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Yeah ... I can't find it anymore either.