Might want to delete the old chapters and replace them with the finished reworks, to make things let confusing for new readers.

Oh I see now, for a second I was confused as I thought you had just done work on the prologue, didn't realize it was a complete re-write. Well guess I'll see how this redo goes.

To be honest it still felt odd at some lines, but overall it was great. Continue the good work.
p.s: here's a tip when it comes to exposition, you can always say this happen, and this happen to this character, but the most important question to have is why did this happen, what does this character feel. Take a look into the nostagia critic review of the avatar movie and you will understand what I am saying.

Just a minor fix 6 centuries is 600 years, of you want 6000 it's millennium.

4121766 thanks for the heads up can't believe I didn't notice that

Good follow up for your reworked prologue.

i read the old one and liked it now i like this on better

4122503 thanks man I try my hardest

4123409 I hoped that this one would be better than the first one and am glad to hear that

Well, this is about to get interesting. BTW, where is Luna?

How could Pinkie fit a metric ton of Confetti into a cannon

Pinkie Logic. Never question it.

I loved it all so much it was awesome I can't wait to see what happens next .And if Celestia is getting latters that Luna is back to her normal salf and would be there to help.I can't wait to see where this is going

shiiitt this is getting good already

Well it's an great story but there were some errors where the words were mixed i guess you could say and some of the of the words needed suffixes kr didn't.Still you are doing an great job

due to my getup saying I looked gay and other hurtful words

Wow, what thin skin.