A good start to the story ! Keep it up ! ''I am doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...'' ? i think you ment ''I am NOT doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...''
I am definitely loving the idea of a Celemac ship, personally I never thought of it but now that I think about it, it seems like it would be awesome! Will this story be updated regularly? I would love to see at least weekly updates, so far I am really liking how this is playing out and I definitely encourage you to continue this story. The only criticism I personally have is the few grammar errors, but other then that I am loving this story so far! So keep writing, and if you can, update it frequently!
before reading chapter: hmmm Big mac and tia.... you have my attention... after reading the chapter: You got my full attention I will make sure to look forward for new chapters!
Oh right, sorry french is my first and native language so I will make a few mistakes. I sadly don't think I will be able to do weekly updates, BUT I work regurlarly on this story, this is my new project now.
I would read, but really, the formatting is really irritating. Why is each and every sentence its own paragraph? (That, and your grammar for punctuation is... Good grief.)
Celemac is just my personal favorite, I can understand other ships like rarimac and CheeriMac and i might try another mac ship after this one. Its just that I prefer ships like Trixie/Mac and CeleMac because I believe opposites attract. A farmer and a princess or a pretentious, narcissistic unicorn and a quiet and humble stallion complement eachother well.
I name the Celestia/Mac ship... Melestia! Characters are in sync, but I notice a mistake, that Rainbow Dash would NEVER make. When she says how awesome Bic Mac is, she says 'Thunderbolts', but they are called 'Wonderbolts'.
A good start to the story ! Keep it up !
''I am doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...'' ? i think you ment ''I am NOT doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...''
I am definitely loving the idea of a Celemac ship, personally I never thought of it but now that I think about it, it seems like it would be awesome! Will this story be updated regularly? I would love to see at least weekly updates, so far I am really liking how this is playing out and I definitely encourage you to continue this story. The only criticism I personally have is the few grammar errors, but other then that I am loving this story so far! So keep writing, and if you can, update it frequently!
before reading chapter:
hmmm Big mac and tia.... you have my attention...
after reading the chapter:
You got my full attention I will make sure to look forward for new chapters!
That last sentence made me fave this
This should be interesting alright
A lot of Celestia ships lately eh?
Its a good start. For now all I can say "Carry On".
Oh right, sorry french is my first and native language so I will make a few mistakes.
I sadly don't think I will be able to do weekly updates, BUT I work regurlarly on this story, this is my new project now.
4160921 Oy! I don't see anything wrong with that, Celestia deserves some love too
I would read, but really, the formatting is really irritating. Why is each and every sentence its own paragraph? (That, and your grammar for punctuation is... Good grief.)
Hey, what about Octavia/Mac?
You had my curiosity. But now you have my attention.
Let see hope it plays out.
4161452 no. the ship is played out already. so shut up
4162120 mac ships are never played out
Well, let's see, shall we? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
4163248 meh. but he's taken in this fic.
Celemac is just my personal favorite, I can understand other ships like rarimac and CheeriMac and i might try another mac ship after this one.
Its just that I prefer ships like Trixie/Mac and CeleMac because I believe opposites attract.
A farmer and a princess or a pretentious, narcissistic unicorn and a quiet and humble stallion complement eachother well.
Should add this to my group! I own this ship! Lol just joking!
4164069 Reminds me of Frozen. Watched the movie the day it went into theaters. I don't understand the popularity of it though.
4165363 of frozen? it was an alright movie but they did better
It needs a bit of editing, but so far not too bad at all
Here, have a thumb up! I'll favorite it when new chapters come about, fair enough?
I really like the set up, it's nice, believable, and no pony was too out of character.
I name the Celestia/Mac ship...
Melestia!
Characters are in sync, but I notice a mistake, that Rainbow Dash would NEVER make. When she says how awesome Bic Mac is, she says 'Thunderbolts', but they are called 'Wonderbolts'.
Good stuff. Keep it up, Jawhol?
Mac in the big city, lets see how this plays out.