The Grand Equestrian Futa Wrestling League has long been one of the nation's biggest sporting events. This year, the Elements of Harmony get to show off their skills in duels of strength, flexibility, and sexual prowess.
I enjoyed this chapter. Expressive, honest, somewhat dominant Luna is a good Luna.
I kinda want to see a Twilight vs Celestia that inexplicably turns uncomfortably sweet and adorable and cuddly. Everyone is either loving it or feeling like they need to give them privacy. A scene with Twilight taking control of a pleasantly surprised Luna would be awesome too, though.
I've always pictured Celestia being old enough to have done everything, and created a few positions along the way.
Naturally. Although for some reason princest seems different to me than, say, Applejack/Big Mac or Twilight/Shining Armor. Never really understood why.
Yeah, I like this characterization of Luna. More often than not, she's written as introspective, shy, and a bit cold. I wanted to do things differently, and I found myself happy with the result. I do wonder if I overdid it a bit, but I like to think of it as an alternate character interpretation rather than her being OOC
As stated a couple times already, that's actually the final round. Luna is the current champion, so the winner of semi-finals will be facing off against her for the grand prize.
4076412 funny thing is that i dont really care in fact there isnt enough there is never enough...so to meet that i think a rumble with all the poines and the princess and why not throw the princess of love in there....AND SPIKE oh yes....that will be just fine
I feel that you wasted a lot of potential for funny banter between Shining Armour (and Cadence) where you just had a single line stating that Cadence made him go watch Twilight's match. Admittedly, that would have risked having her steal the spotlight again
there was another fic that involved futa and wrestling , i've since forgotten about it , maybe i have it somewhere in my read later , but does anyone know the other fic im talking about that could inform me where it is?....
Possibly, but I never planned on having Cadance stick around for more than one chapter. Besides, to be honest, there wouldn't have been so much 'banter' as 'screwing each other senseless'.
The problem with that is that I didn't want to try a Cadance/Shining scene without giving it full detail. However, if I had done that, it would have distracted from Luna and Celestia, and made the chapter clunky and fragmented. The readers would have had to switch to an entirely different perspective every few paragraphs, and that wouldn't have been ideal.
However, I do have some ideas in mind. Cadance might be making another appearance, especially since so many commenters liked her so much, but I'm not 100% sure on that yet.
you already know what my issues with this fic are. after the last chapter i nearly downvoted it. but this chapter just threw me over the edge and i changed my upvote to a downvote. i cant take anymore OOC-ness and contrived plot holes for the sake of clop anymore.
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Princest is best incest.
I agree, one of your best chapters yet.
I LOVE IT!
So many cums in only one chapter you need to keep them comming
I was hoping for a chapter like this! I could read about both our favorite princest partners all day.
Could it be possible to make the winner of the finals fight the champion of the last turnament in order to become the new champion?
Like another bonus chapter, or something.
Incestion at it's finest!
I enjoyed this chapter. Expressive, honest, somewhat dominant Luna is a good Luna.
I kinda want to see a Twilight vs Celestia that inexplicably turns uncomfortably sweet and adorable and cuddly. Everyone is either loving it or feeling like they need to give them privacy. A scene with Twilight taking control of a pleasantly surprised Luna would be awesome too, though.
I've always pictured Celestia being old enough to have doneeverything, and created a few positions along the way.....daaaamn.
This is why writing should be allowed to be...fluid.
I REGRET NOTHING
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>mfw
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Naturally. Although for some reason princest seems different to me than, say, Applejack/Big Mac or Twilight/Shining Armor. Never really understood why.
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Thanks! I think this chapter turned out really well. I hadn't felt so excited about posting a new chapter since the original one.
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Mmmmmaybe the spooge was a bit over the top this time, but I think we abandoned dignity and restraint about four chapters ago.
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Yeah, I like this characterization of Luna. More often than not, she's written as introspective, shy, and a bit cold. I wanted to do things differently, and I found myself happy with the result. I do wonder if I overdid it a bit, but I like to think of it as an alternate character interpretation rather than her being OOC
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That good or bad?
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As stated a couple times already, that's actually the final round. Luna is the current champion, so the winner of semi-finals will be facing off against her for the grand prize.
4076412 Definitely good.
Now I wonder who's next...?
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While the horrendous pun was quite deliberate, I had meant that in a positive way.
I have a bit of a thing for excessive cum. Especially when it comes from futa-cock.
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4076412 Oh, I didn't know that thanks
4076412 funny thing is that i dont really care in fact there isnt enough there is never enough...so to meet that i think a rumble with all the poines and the princess and why not throw the princess of love in there....AND SPIKE oh yes....that will be just fine
Can't help but notice that, in almost all of these matches, whoever loses first wins in all but (I believe) one case.
I feel that you wasted a lot of potential for funny banter between Shining Armour (and Cadence) where you just had a single line stating that Cadence made him go watch Twilight's match. Admittedly, that would have risked having her steal the spotlight again
there was another fic that involved futa and wrestling , i've since forgotten about it , maybe i have it somewhere in my read later , but does anyone know the other fic im talking about that could inform me where it is?....
This is my new favorite clopfics of all time.
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I never actually said it was going away
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True. That's not really intentional, it just kind of ends up that way. Maybe I just like comebacks?
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Possibly, but I never planned on having Cadance stick around for more than one chapter. Besides, to be honest, there wouldn't have been so much 'banter' as 'screwing each other senseless'.
The problem with that is that I didn't want to try a Cadance/Shining scene without giving it full detail. However, if I had done that, it would have distracted from Luna and Celestia, and made the chapter clunky and fragmented. The readers would have had to switch to an entirely different perspective every few paragraphs, and that wouldn't have been ideal.
However, I do have some ideas in mind. Cadance might be making another appearance, especially since so many commenters liked her so much, but I'm not 100% sure on that yet.
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Sorry, can't say. You're the second person to mention it that I've seen, but I wasn't aware it existed until someone brought it up.
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Thanks!
4081006 yes now....time to go over the planes of the next chapterspike will be involved don't know how but he willany ideas on that?
Princest?
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O.o
wait! where is Cadence?
The only thing that could have made it better is if Cadence or Chrysalis (or both) were blowing Shining under the table
you already know what my issues with this fic are. after the last chapter i nearly downvoted it. but this chapter just threw me over the edge and i changed my upvote to a downvote. i cant take anymore OOC-ness and contrived plot holes for the sake of clop anymore.
4146474 ...That is what the majority of clop is, dum dum. If it isn't, then where is the train you're getting off on?
PRINCEST IS WINCEST!
I SHIP LUNESTIA!
this is so hot, it actually left me flushed (which is hard to do)