They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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Thanks for the credit, and congrats for doing a great job overall! First comment!
5184763 FIRST!
Oh wow if Chrysalis heard him he would be shorter and much more dead :P
5184813 WAY more dead.
Lovely chapter, now things get interesting! I gotta wonder how tough the changelings will be under the Crystal Heart field? Every changeling a Twilight Sparkle, perhaps? Chrysalis exceeded Celestia, after all.
And of course, Chickit is an ass.
Brought.
Can not WAIT to see what's next!
5184827 Thanks for the reading, and thanks for the grammar catch! I'll fix it once fimfiction's servers stop acting stupid.
5184872 Ah, so it's not just me getting the 500s?
5184896 No, me too.
Well, that was a really good job as always. Also very sentimental, but in a good kind of way.
Let me be a little nitpick: what's with calling Chrysalis and her Mom 'mares'? Sure, given the circumstances calling them 'bugs' (which they technically are) would've broken the mood, but it was still possible to go with something neutral as 'changeling'... or something.
Also, it just occurred to me that you called Twilight a unicorn. Somehow I thought this story included Twilicorn.
5188431 Nah, I decided this would be pre-Twilight's ascension
5188435 I like it! Btw i sent you a message in deviantart please answer!!!!
5197964 I know, haven't gotten around to it yet :(
5197991 Aaah sorry cool thanks. Tell me what you think about it tho.
I found a 'Chyrsalis' somewhere in the flashback.
Another nice chapter, but our Chryssie! D:
If i had doubts before they're gone now general is going to betray Chryssy at some point, i can feel it in my bones