They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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5463138 Damn, hold on....
5463146
Are you perchance working on 2 fics at the time? it looked like a mix up.
Awesome story as always. Now the best part begins.
5463238 Actually, that's from an older version of this story. This story was originally meant to be a sequel to "The Chronicles of Swarm," but that didn't work out too well.
5463272 Just because the saliva is different colored doesn't mean it's acidic...you're thinking too much of Xenomorphs. Though I can see the resemblance.
Why isn't that a thing yet? AlienXMLP crossover?
Holy fucking shit look!
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A speciest dick. Lel.
You accidentally the f in 'from'.
Okay, so Bait with Pinkie, so that leaves Switch with Fluttershy. I can't wait.
The 'true swarm'? Things that base their names on the No True Scottsman fallacy can never be good news...
Another excellent chapter, I eagerly await MOAR!
5463288 No, I mean earlier when Chrysalis woke from her nightmare, her acidic saliva had eaten through her sheets. Unless you changed that.
5464222 Whaaat? Chrysalis is running off the juice of an entire city! She took down Celestia in one shot with the love of just ONE regular pony! With a whole city in her, she could probably scoop Equestria out of the ground and toss it into the sun!
Methinks Chikit is up to no good...
5466037 Thank you!
Moar!!!
5471313 Comin' up!
Love at first punch. Or, rather, love at first Party Cannon blast.
5473306 It's a beautiful thing....
5475292 Future predictions.
1. Chrysalis comes to Luna to gloat only for her capive to ask why she suddenly went rage crazy. She then goes on a rant about everything that happened to her species, blaming her and the ponies. When Luna says she understands, Chrysalis starts a "what would you know?" rant before Luna shoots her down with "most still see me as Nightmare Moon." The seed of doubt is planted.
2. Bait and Switch can't help but investigate Pinkie and Fluttershy, what with them (especially the latter) not meeting their expectations of "badass pony special ops team." Bait not-so-subtly hits on Pinkie while Fluttershy asks why Switch felt bad about capturing them. More doubt sown.
3. After Chickit (or whatever his name is) springs his revolutions Bait and Switch have to go find the rebels to help. Assuming that they aren't able to get Pinkie and Fluttershy out with them, they manage to convince the other Elements to trust them with a Pinkie Pie Promise.
I've been on T.V. Tropes too long.
5523668 Yeah...too bad you're wrong on all counts.
5523759 All of them!? I am now even more intrigued! However, if those three pairings don't come to be I will be... Well, anywhere from upset to enraged depending upon the quality of the work. Judging by the quality so far, it will likely be the former.
5524469 Oh...stop it...you're making me blush!
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Which, with my ultra-manly beard, you can't even tell, of course.
5525764 And now I'm disappointed in myself that I didn't make this the case.
5590489 I know, but it being from her mouth got me thinking, 'Why doesn't she just spit at her?'
Aww, Switch is in love.
And Chickit needs to be punted, hard.