With crime rising in the city, Jason Valentine didn't expect the crime expand past the city limits.....but he was wrong when he went home a week later.
Just a tip for the title and chapter names: Capitalise everything except 'the', 'and', 'or', 'if', etc. (Insignificant words). Your title would, I done like this, be 'The Rise of the Sacred Stallion.' (First word is alway capitalised, no matter what.) Ch. 1: Late Nights Make Big Fights Ch. 4: Meaning Well
I thank you two for showing me my errors and thank you for it, I am not clearly a author but I do try my best when I am writing and am truly sorry that it is not......at it's best, again I apologize for the inconvenience of my poor writing and hope I can learn a valuable lesson from this mistake.
3930218 Sorry, but I'll have to decline on that. I'm a very slow writer (due to nervous perfectionism), and if I were to edit your stories I would 1: Basically rewrite the stories for you (Although it needs to be rewritten, I think it would best be done by your hand with help, not done for you), and 2: I would be spending more time than I have doing so. Sorry. I can, however, send you a link to groups like Overly Extensive Editors (the one that I've heard the best things about), Looking for Editors (the most popular), Editors for Struggling Fan Fiction (small group=less competition for editors. maybe), Editors-R-Us, and Proofreaders, Editors, Authors, and Idealists. I wish you luck in finding a good editor, and hope you always keep aspiring to be a better author.
Can people tell me what they think, I mean honestly I would accept anything now.
Just a tip for the title and chapter names: Capitalise everything except 'the', 'and', 'or', 'if', etc. (Insignificant words). Your title would, I done like this, be 'The Rise of the Sacred Stallion.' (First word is alway capitalised, no matter what.)
Ch. 1: Late Nights Make Big Fights
Ch. 4: Meaning Well
Just a tip.
~ Decaf
I thank you two for showing me my errors and thank you for it, I am not clearly a author but I do try my best when I am writing and am truly sorry that it is not......at it's best, again I apologize for the inconvenience of my poor writing and hope I can learn a valuable lesson from this mistake.
3926220 You are not rude, and I appreciate your honesty, would you like to be a editor for me since you have so much experience?
3930218 Sorry, but I'll have to decline on that. I'm a very slow writer (due to nervous perfectionism), and if I were to edit your stories I would 1: Basically rewrite the stories for you (Although it needs to be rewritten, I think it would best be done by your hand with help, not done for you), and 2: I would be spending more time than I have doing so. Sorry. I can, however, send you a link to groups like Overly Extensive Editors (the one that I've heard the best things about), Looking for Editors (the most popular), Editors for Struggling Fan Fiction (small group=less competition for editors. maybe), Editors-R-Us, and Proofreaders, Editors, Authors, and Idealists. I wish you luck in finding a good editor, and hope you always keep aspiring to be a better author.